The spirit stops fighting.
People don't give up the spirit is tired of fighting3 total reviews
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your exquisite picture and dramatic poem are a perfect match. I guessing it is sundown... but it could be dawn. I also enjoyed its positive conclusion!
My best in willing the contest.
Deborah
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Dear Author,
Your exquisite picture and dramatic poem are a perfect match. I guessing it is sundown... but it could be dawn. I also enjoyed its positive conclusion!
My best in willing the contest.
Deborah
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. I appreciate you reading this.
Comment from humpwhistle
Without your notes, I'd have no idea what your poem means.
I have no context by which to grasp your intention.
I know seven words doesn't give you much leeway,
but that's the challenge.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Without your notes, I'd have no idea what your poem means.
I have no context by which to grasp your intention.
I know seven words doesn't give you much leeway,
but that's the challenge.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Yes only seven words is a challenge. Thank you for reading.
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is good but I also think each person must decide when that resting time is, it's different of each of us. Thank goodness, God is right there to help. ;) Best of luck witth this piece.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This is good but I also think each person must decide when that resting time is, it's different of each of us. Thank goodness, God is right there to help. ;) Best of luck witth this piece.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for your review and rating. Yes it is up to each person when the time is to rest. Thank you for reading.