Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "I know, Sis I'm Glad I Said Yes."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a wonderful offering for the contest, Rhonnie -- love the sentiments and, especially that last line... it just ties the whole vision of words and emotions together! :) ;) I would suggest, perhaps, that you try removing all of your quotation marks as they are too much of a distraction in this limited format. :) Also, I would suggest the following:
Congratulations sister....
Still water runs deep.
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Congratulations, sister -
Still water runs deep...
Neither changes your words, only the presentation/consumption of them... thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This is a wonderful offering for the contest, Rhonnie -- love the sentiments and, especially that last line... it just ties the whole vision of words and emotions together! :) ;) I would suggest, perhaps, that you try removing all of your quotation marks as they are too much of a distraction in this limited format. :) Also, I would suggest the following:
Congratulations sister....
Still water runs deep.
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Congratulations, sister -
Still water runs deep...
Neither changes your words, only the presentation/consumption of them... thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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HELLO Y.M. ROGER: Thank you for viewing my poem. You always give me encouraging reviews. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Not sure what I like best. Is it your poetry or is it the picture you selected that matches your poem so well. I am sure you are going to do really well in your 5-7-5 poetry contest. Good job!
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Not sure what I like best. Is it your poetry or is it the picture you selected that matches your poem so well. I am sure you are going to do really well in your 5-7-5 poetry contest. Good job!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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HELLO SANDRA: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. As usual, you are appreciated, my friend. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
