Comment from Aliene

Excellent

In this very short poem you have made good use of sensory imagery. The last line allows the reader to determine the nature of the coming rain. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 25-May-2019

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from DeborahWrite

Excellent

Dear Author,

I enjoyed your short poem, "Forecast", and I loved your picture. Your description of the morning reached my senses!
My best of luck in the contest!

My best,
Deborah

 Comment Written 24-May-2019

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reply by the author on 24-May-2019

Thanks for the read and the kind words.

reply by DeborahWrite on 25-May-2019

My pleasure

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well presented poem you have penned for the Seven Words or Less Poem for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery that warned of coming rain. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-May-2019

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reply by the author on 23-May-2019

Thanks much for your read and comments and for the blessing.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is usually my regular scene, but today we have sunshine and it has been glorious! Those geese certainly make a racket whether in the air or on the water! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-May-2019

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reply by the author on 23-May-2019

Thanks for the read and review. They're kind of like an alarm clock at times.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

What's interesting about this contest using only seven words, is that you can put it in a one Line, two lines, or in a three line format. I think using just one line for the seven words is very effective. It would definitely influence my poem if I would decide to enter. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 23-May-2019

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reply by the author on 23-May-2019

Thanks for the read and the comment. I thought about three lines, but I decided I like the straight line look better.