In Springtime
7 words on the beauty of Spring5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This seven-word poem, In Springtime, says a lot in a few words. So happy that we haven't got to fight for mere existence each spring, like the beautiful creatures which survive the seasons.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This seven-word poem, In Springtime, says a lot in a few words. So happy that we haven't got to fight for mere existence each spring, like the beautiful creatures which survive the seasons.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I agree with your comments. I also appreciate the stars!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
A lovely poem and great contest entry! I love your selected picture of a bird and your thoughts on spring. Our spring had early rain, which was the year's finest with early blooms!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Dear Author,
A lovely poem and great contest entry! I love your selected picture of a bird and your thoughts on spring. Our spring had early rain, which was the year's finest with early blooms!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the stars and the comments! Yes, we are undergoing rain and tornadoes now.
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I am so sorry to read this--please stay well!
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Thank you, ever so much!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 7 word poem about nature putting forth it's finest. You used very good words and very lovely art work too. We have the tornadoes too at times. Nice job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This is a very well written 7 word poem about nature putting forth it's finest. You used very good words and very lovely art work too. We have the tornadoes too at times. Nice job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you! The stars and your comments mean so much!
Comment from victor 66
I wasn't aware that you could use this format for a seven Word poem and putting it into three lines. Just reading your work, I can see where it makes sense. Obviously, you have done a good job. I wish you well in a contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I wasn't aware that you could use this format for a seven Word poem and putting it into three lines. Just reading your work, I can see where it makes sense. Obviously, you have done a good job. I wish you well in a contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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All i read in the description was 7 words or less. Also I read one in three words and 3 lines. I do thank you much for the stars and the comments, as well as the well wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Effective use of
one continuous thought
and alliteration.
-Good description of spring.
-There is so much
natural beauty in nature at
this time of year.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Effective use of
one continuous thought
and alliteration.
-Good description of spring.
-There is so much
natural beauty in nature at
this time of year.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you! The stars and your comments are most appreciated! Also grateful for the good luck wish!
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You are quite welcome.