Endless Passage
Down Deep11 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a story, ghostly and eerie and there must be so many wrecks under the ocean over the years with precious artefacts and dead souls lurking, you chilled me to the bone with your words, this is a winner for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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What a story, ghostly and eerie and there must be so many wrecks under the ocean over the years with precious artefacts and dead souls lurking, you chilled me to the bone with your words, this is a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review, i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I really like ghost stories, and I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. You told a great story, and I could easily picture both the scenery and the lost souls. The artwork and color scheme would perfect choices.
Great job, and best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I really like ghost stories, and I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. You told a great story, and I could easily picture both the scenery and the lost souls. The artwork and color scheme would perfect choices.
Great job, and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem...it means a lot.
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My pleasure :))
Comment from WryWriter
This is an excellent ghost poem with the theme of the lost Titanic. The chosen artwork fits this perfectly. I think I would leave the word "a" out of the seventh stanza. I especially liked the second stanza and the last stanza. Great work!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This is an excellent ghost poem with the theme of the lost Titanic. The chosen artwork fits this perfectly. I think I would leave the word "a" out of the seventh stanza. I especially liked the second stanza and the last stanza. Great work!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for the excellent suggestion. I took yout advice, so thank you for that. I really appreciate it.
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You're welcome! Glad I could help in some small way. : )
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Outstanding. I would award you with a six star, but I have already used them. This, to say the least, is very spooky. Is it the Titanic you are referring to? Wasn't they trying to bring it to the surface at one time?
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Outstanding. I would award you with a six star, but I have already used them. This, to say the least, is very spooky. Is it the Titanic you are referring to? Wasn't they trying to bring it to the surface at one time?
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so much. Yes, its the titanic, which was broken in two when it was found and not recoverable. There was a movie though called Raise the Titanic.A pretty good movie. Thanks again for reading.
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did a stand up job with this poem! I loved the storyline (I'm a big fan of ghost stories) and you chose your rhyming words well. Nicely done and very entertaining. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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You did a stand up job with this poem! I loved the storyline (I'm a big fan of ghost stories) and you chose your rhyming words well. Nicely done and very entertaining. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from victor 66
I think this is a quite an extraordinary ghost story and a poetic format involving the Titanic. Your imagination has brought to life the ghosts of that terrible tragedy. I can't guarantee that you will win this contest, but in my opinion you should. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I think this is a quite an extraordinary ghost story and a poetic format involving the Titanic. Your imagination has brought to life the ghosts of that terrible tragedy. I can't guarantee that you will win this contest, but in my opinion you should. Best wishes.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Wow! Thank you for this wonderful review and the six stars. You made my day! :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about a ghost under the murky ocean depths and two point four long miles down in a ship of great renown; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This poem speaks about a ghost under the murky ocean depths and two point four long miles down in a ship of great renown; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and for the encouragement. Its much appreciated. :)
Comment from Possummagic
A beautifully written poem which of course describes a tale we all know well. The maiden voyage of the Titanic was never meant to end in Dave Jones locker. The imagery at first glance reminded me of "A dream within a dream" and in sentiment the same is true. Beautiful, timeless. PM
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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A beautifully written poem which of course describes a tale we all know well. The maiden voyage of the Titanic was never meant to end in Dave Jones locker. The imagery at first glance reminded me of "A dream within a dream" and in sentiment the same is true. Beautiful, timeless. PM
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the 5 stars. It means so much to me. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from AprilViolet
I've long been fascinated by the Titantic and its tragic tale. This poem takes you back in time to that fateful day and brings you back to the present. Exceptionally written poem, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I've long been fascinated by the Titantic and its tragic tale. This poem takes you back in time to that fateful day and brings you back to the present. Exceptionally written poem, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Very poignant poem about the Titanic. When I was young, I remember watching a show on TV with a woman who was a girl about my age at that time when she was rescued from the ship. She said something I never forgot. She said the screams were deafening and horrible, but what was much worse, was the quiet that followed.
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reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Very poignant poem about the Titanic. When I was young, I remember watching a show on TV with a woman who was a girl about my age at that time when she was rescued from the ship. She said something I never forgot. She said the screams were deafening and horrible, but what was much worse, was the quiet that followed.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Ive had a fascination with the titanic for years. Its terrifying what those people went through. Thank you for reading and re iewing my poem. :)
