First Crush
A 2-4-6 poem10 total reviews
Comment from JennaG
Very nice 2-4-6 poem! I especially like the words chosen to end each line. This piece definitely captures the feelings of a first crush and is sure to bring back fond youthful memories for many readers, this one included! :)
Well done! I enjoyed the read! :)
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Very nice 2-4-6 poem! I especially like the words chosen to end each line. This piece definitely captures the feelings of a first crush and is sure to bring back fond youthful memories for many readers, this one included! :)
Well done! I enjoyed the read! :)
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this fun little piece! Thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from sharonlshelley
great first love 5-7-5 poem a place where most of us have been at one time or another. love the picture, good luck in the poetry compition thanks for sharing your work
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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great first love 5-7-5 poem a place where most of us have been at one time or another. love the picture, good luck in the poetry compition thanks for sharing your work
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this fun little piece! Thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is so cute! Love the artwork you chose, as well as your color scheme and font. Beautiful rhyme, and a perfect 2-4-6.
'Crush, blush, mush' certainly do describe 'First Crush'.
Well done and an excellent contest entry! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This is so cute! Love the artwork you chose, as well as your color scheme and font. Beautiful rhyme, and a perfect 2-4-6.
'Crush, blush, mush' certainly do describe 'First Crush'.
Well done and an excellent contest entry! Best wishes!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your sentiments.
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Loved it!
Comment from Richard J
Awww!
Now, this is as cute as cute can be, with a great presentation and the sweetheart of a spot-on rhyming message.
And, this is just how it gets started! ; )
Thanks for sharing this surefire winner! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Awww!
Now, this is as cute as cute can be, with a great presentation and the sweetheart of a spot-on rhyming message.
And, this is just how it gets started! ; )
Thanks for sharing this surefire winner! ~ Richard
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your encouraging comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6, Budding Romance, has the right set up and takes us back to that very first, world shaking introduction of puppy love.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This 2-4-6, Budding Romance, has the right set up and takes us back to that very first, world shaking introduction of puppy love.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Yes, the joys of young romance! Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece. Thanks for stopping by to read and review.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
June, this is a great 2-4-6 poem. I really enjoyed it. It brought back sweet memories of when I was younger. It didn't take much for my face to blush when a cute boy was around. I never knew how to act. Those were the days - young, innocent and full of wonder. ~DD
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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June, this is a great 2-4-6 poem. I really enjoyed it. It brought back sweet memories of when I was younger. It didn't take much for my face to blush when a cute boy was around. I never knew how to act. Those were the days - young, innocent and full of wonder. ~DD
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on young love! Thanks for dropping by to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaawww! How could anyone NOT love this one?! :) ;) You've met the strict format requirements and it evokes emotions -- great job! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Aaawww! How could anyone NOT love this one?! :) ;) You've met the strict format requirements and it evokes emotions -- great job! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on young love! Thanks for dropping by to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from Janilou
Super cute poem and the artwork is a perfect match to boot!
Loved it.
First crush
Burning cheeks blush
as two hearts turn to mush
In my memory, only one heart turned to mush. The object of my affections at the time, was completely unaffected by my declaration of love! LOL
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Super cute poem and the artwork is a perfect match to boot!
Loved it.
First crush
Burning cheeks blush
as two hearts turn to mush
In my memory, only one heart turned to mush. The object of my affections at the time, was completely unaffected by my declaration of love! LOL
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on young love! Thanks for dropping by to read and share your sentiments. Although, more often than not the object of our affection is totally oblivious...
Comment from RodG
A delightful snapshot of two youngsters experiencing their first taste of romance. Your camera zooms in on blushing cheeks and stampeding pulses. Nicely done. Rod
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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A delightful snapshot of two youngsters experiencing their first taste of romance. Your camera zooms in on blushing cheeks and stampeding pulses. Nicely done. Rod
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Always nice to hear from you.
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
My first crush was so long ago but I remember it. You touched the sentiment of the time. I like the simplicity and graceful words. You did a fine job. Thank you.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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My first crush was so long ago but I remember it. You touched the sentiment of the time. I like the simplicity and graceful words. You did a fine job. Thank you.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Young love is precious.
