GOD Whispers....
Hopefully an inspiration for poets19 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Such a beautifully written Christian poem. Yes, in our later years we need Him more to lean upon. "He will never forsake us," we belong to Him no matter where in life we travel, He is present day to day. May I suggest you use color and maybe photographs (free from Bing) to enhance your writing. Blessings, K.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Such a beautifully written Christian poem. Yes, in our later years we need Him more to lean upon. "He will never forsake us," we belong to Him no matter where in life we travel, He is present day to day. May I suggest you use color and maybe photographs (free from Bing) to enhance your writing. Blessings, K.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you K, for your lovely review and stars and always a joy to hear from another aussie poet....like me! Vance
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a wonderful, spiritual poem. It effectively and realistically describes the passage of time, but it is not depressing. The poem does not resort to platitudes, but there is still optimism.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This is a wonderful, spiritual poem. It effectively and realistically describes the passage of time, but it is not depressing. The poem does not resort to platitudes, but there is still optimism.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you James for your excellent review and stars so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, God Whispers, has a warm message of inclusiveness which also reminds the readers that God's love is with us in all stages until the end.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This poem, God Whispers, has a warm message of inclusiveness which also reminds the readers that God's love is with us in all stages until the end.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Bill, for your lovely review and generous stars, so very sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS:Vance
Comment from Bill Pinder
Good expression of the power of faith to bring peace in the midst of very tough situations in life. Thanks for sharing this as a creative form of encouragement. Have a great weekend! Bill
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Good expression of the power of faith to bring peace in the midst of very tough situations in life. Thanks for sharing this as a creative form of encouragement. Have a great weekend! Bill
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you Bill, for your great review and stars so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent. I would disagree with you on one point. Heaven isn't a state of
mind, unless you mean the world can be heaven in the mind. Although I prefer rhyming poetry, this is very good.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Excellent. I would disagree with you on one point. Heaven isn't a state of
mind, unless you mean the world can be heaven in the mind. Although I prefer rhyming poetry, this is very good.
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks so much for your great review Willie and I really appreciated it very much! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely offering of reassurance, sir -- thank you for passing along such gentle and poetic reminders for all! ;) I've included a couple of catches below... :) Yvette :)
Sends the aging --> Send the aging [modifying 'ashes' I believe]
whereYou are --> where You are [also, did you mean to capitalize 'you'?]
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Such a lovely offering of reassurance, sir -- thank you for passing along such gentle and poetic reminders for all! ;) I've included a couple of catches below... :) Yvette :)
Sends the aging --> Send the aging [modifying 'ashes' I believe]
whereYou are --> where You are [also, did you mean to capitalize 'you'?]
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Y.M. Roger, for your excellent review and tips on my latest post, so much appreciated, HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from kahpot
The begging and ending of this wonderful poem lets us know that faith in and for God is needed (in any hour) an excellent read and message for all, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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The begging and ending of this wonderful poem lets us know that faith in and for God is needed (in any hour) an excellent read and message for all, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Kahpot for your lovely review and stars, so sincerely appreciated!! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is a good description of age and how faith helps you though the rough patches of age. By part is the statement "Heaven is a state of mind".
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This poem is a good description of age and how faith helps you though the rough patches of age. By part is the statement "Heaven is a state of mind".
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks dear Joan, for your lovely review, stars and encouragement so sincerely appreciated! please stay close always! Vance
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You are most kindly welcome, Vance.
~Joan
Comment from Bucketlist
Vance, this is just wonderful! I will remember this one easily. It's a beautiful thought. You have expressed it in a format I haven't seen you use in a long time. Thank you for sharing, and I hope you gather strength every day.
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Vance, this is just wonderful! I will remember this one easily. It's a beautiful thought. You have expressed it in a format I haven't seen you use in a long time. Thank you for sharing, and I hope you gather strength every day.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
Bless you dearest Trisha and hugs back to you also, for your very lovely review and wonderful six stars so very very sincerely appreciated! Love You~~ Vance
Comment from judiverse
Beautifully expressed. How wonderful to find that place where you can be warmed and rested. God's love is that place, as you express. The elderly may feel uncertainty as they near life's end. The words in your last line are especially comforting. Heaven is a state of mind where all will be welcomed at any hour. Lovely work. judi
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Beautifully expressed. How wonderful to find that place where you can be warmed and rested. God's love is that place, as you express. The elderly may feel uncertainty as they near life's end. The words in your last line are especially comforting. Heaven is a state of mind where all will be welcomed at any hour. Lovely work. judi
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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You're very welcome. judi
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Thanks even more! LOVE Vance
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You're welcome. such a lovely thought in your poem. judi