Blanket of Silence
A '5-7-5 Winter' Contest Offering16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Blanket of silence, snow layers on surface, otherwise Nature's cloak, snow in winter makes our living chaotic; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Blanket of silence, snow layers on surface, otherwise Nature's cloak, snow in winter makes our living chaotic; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I enjoyed the poem. Even with restrictions you found a way to make it sound like a poem should sound. A little melodic which I liked. Well written!
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I enjoyed the poem. Even with restrictions you found a way to make it sound like a poem should sound. A little melodic which I liked. Well written!
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. ;)
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you're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed these words because snow haunts everything and stops us in our tracks and we have no choice but to slow down as nature teaches us that there are bigger things in this world than ourselves, a poignant write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I enjoyed these words because snow haunts everything and stops us in our tracks and we have no choice but to slow down as nature teaches us that there are bigger things in this world than ourselves, a poignant write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging comments. ;)
Comment from rspoet
You've written a very fine poem on winter
and excellent entry for the contest
with exact syllables and the nice addition
of the alliteration of "c" and "s"
Well done
Good luck in the voting.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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You've written a very fine poem on winter
and excellent entry for the contest
with exact syllables and the nice addition
of the alliteration of "c" and "s"
Well done
Good luck in the voting.
Robert
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from oliver818
Wonderful poem. I love the imagery you use, it works really well and creates a beautiful image in so few words. Very impressive. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Wonderful poem. I love the imagery you use, it works really well and creates a beautiful image in so few words. Very impressive. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Wow, Oliver!! You just made my evening, sir! :) Thank you for your review and those wonderful comments accompanied by those lovely stars! :)
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My pleasure!
Comment from RodG
Good use of synonyms CLOAK and SHROUD to set the mood and show what snow can do.
The S-alliteration in line 2 enhances that mood of silence.
Finally, the contrast between Winter's world and the "chaotic" world is very distinct.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Good use of synonyms CLOAK and SHROUD to set the mood and show what snow can do.
The S-alliteration in line 2 enhances that mood of silence.
Finally, the contrast between Winter's world and the "chaotic" world is very distinct.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you.
