A 'Forever' Responsibility
A 3-5-3 Contest Offering16 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
I love this entry. I love what it says and how you've taken the extra effort to write it in different colors. I want to learn how to change the font, the font size and put the lines in different colors! I tried. *~* Good luck in the contest. I just looked at the voting. . .this piece is doing very well, congrats!!!! :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I love this entry. I love what it says and how you've taken the extra effort to write it in different colors. I want to learn how to change the font, the font size and put the lines in different colors! I tried. *~* Good luck in the contest. I just looked at the voting. . .this piece is doing very well, congrats!!!! :)
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you for your review and such meaningful comments. ;) Ask me after the contest..... ;)
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Wahoo! I'm sure you've won. Your piece was way ahead of all the rest, including mine. :)
Comment from WryWriter
I count 3-5-3 syllable lines as per writing prompt requirement. The artwork is gorgeous. I love the poem! What a genius idea! Great job!
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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I count 3-5-3 syllable lines as per writing prompt requirement. The artwork is gorgeous. I love the poem! What a genius idea! Great job!
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Wow, WryWriter! :) Thank you for those lovely stars - I am so very glad you enjoyed! :)
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love this little play on words. Night becomes a damsel in distress it seems and her hero is the stars who much reach out to catch her before she falls to Earth.
Good Luck
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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I love this little play on words. Night becomes a damsel in distress it seems and her hero is the stars who much reach out to catch her before she falls to Earth.
Good Luck
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for your review and your wonderful comments. ;)
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is really cute. I truly enjoyed the whimsy and originality in your short, short. It's not a serious write nor is it a nature piece. It's in a class of its own. Nicely done. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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This is really cute. I truly enjoyed the whimsy and originality in your short, short. It's not a serious write nor is it a nature piece. It's in a class of its own. Nicely done. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for the review and for those wonderful comments. :)
Comment from karenina
I'm always complaining about the many (too many) short short poem contests. I'll shut up now. Your poem impacted me with its beauty and cleverness and wit and awe. I had my doubts if anyone would ever truly move me with eleven words. DING DING! We have a winner. Very impactful!--Karenina
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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I'm always complaining about the many (too many) short short poem contests. I'll shut up now. Your poem impacted me with its beauty and cleverness and wit and awe. I had my doubts if anyone would ever truly move me with eleven words. DING DING! We have a winner. Very impactful!--Karenina
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Wow -- your words mean a lot, Karenina -- so glad I could touch you today...... be sure to watch the stars perform their 'rescue' tonight where you are! :)
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Seriously. I sigh when I see yet another short-short contest...then you came along and as I read and contemplated the enormity of the meaning you captured I said to myself: "Darn!--It CAN be done!"--I WILL sneak out and enjoy the "late show" tonight!--Karenina
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Hooray! :) I'm really glad I may have converted you.... these shorts are just perfect for my 'brain' to escape for a bit yet still make a meaningful impact! Great for the glass of iced tea when the stress of day is peeling off, ya know?! :) ;) Thanx again! :)
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Very impressive! I might even try one...someday!--Karenina
Comment from Nanny 6
Your poem has a true poetic ring to it. I went back and reread it several times, I love the feel of it. It shows a vivid picture. Good luck in the contest!
Judy
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Your poem has a true poetic ring to it. I went back and reread it several times, I love the feel of it. It shows a vivid picture. Good luck in the contest!
Judy
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and thank you for stopping by for the review. ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Wish I had six stars in my possession to give to you, Mystery Writer!
Love the sentiment and the accompanying artwork.
When night falls in my part the world these days, it's time to cover the spring flowers and light a fire... :)
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Wish I had six stars in my possession to give to you, Mystery Writer!
Love the sentiment and the accompanying artwork.
When night falls in my part the world these days, it's time to cover the spring flowers and light a fire... :)
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Just your words are enough, Lady Diane -- thank you from my heart! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the stars who should take the responsibility to catch the night when it falls and saves it from being damaged.
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the stars who should take the responsibility to catch the night when it falls and saves it from being damaged.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Sandra - you made me chuckle. ;)
Comment from sunnilicious
Beautiful presentation. Nice artwork choice. And this short poem packs a powerful punch of lovliness. Well thought out. Clearly written. Creative. Romantic. God bless you :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Beautiful presentation. Nice artwork choice. And this short poem packs a powerful punch of lovliness. Well thought out. Clearly written. Creative. Romantic. God bless you :)
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Wow, Sunni, you humble me, ma'am -- thank you so very much for those lovely stars and for your awesome comments... sure hope your smile lasts a few day (I know mine will!) Thanx and have a great week! :)
Comment from victor 66
This is a very clever use of words in this very shor 3-5-3 poetic format. The Illustration really sets The tone for your entry as well. I only wish mine was near as good. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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This is a very clever use of words in this very shor 3-5-3 poetic format. The Illustration really sets The tone for your entry as well. I only wish mine was near as good. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for your review and encouraging comments. ;)
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Your poem was very good and was worth at least an excellent review. You are welcome.
