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One Man's Blessing...

A bond that spans the generations

36 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Excellent entry for the contest. I like reading stories about good relationships, and this one definitely qualifies as a good connection between grandson and his granddad. Thanks for sharing! Bill

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Bill -- relationships that span the generations are priceless! :) ;) Thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from aryr
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Good luck in the flash fiction contest, Yvette. This was absolutely great and rather inspiring. I think it is important for the generations to establish a bond and maintain it. I really enjoyed the obvious bond between Scott and his Paw-Paw.

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hooray for inspiration, ali! :) You know, I still miss my Maw-Maw even decades later... Glad you enjoyed this one -- thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
reply by aryr on 21-May-2019
    You as well Yvette, enjoy your week, you are so welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Aww, Yvette what a lovely story!! I love that the grandfather and grandson were really happy that he didn't get into that retirement home. That was such an uplifting, wonderful story. Well done, my friend and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Sandra -- so good to hear the smile in your voice! ;) Thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written seventy-five word flash fiction about the grandpa living with his grandson in a single room awaiting acceptance in an old age facility, the child and grandpa seems to wish the arrangement never ends.

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    I think it may be more than wishing, but I'll never tell - LOL! Thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw, Sandra! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Hahahaha!
No matter how good a retirement community or assisted living facility may or may not be there is nothing that can compare to the comfort of home.
It's said "home is where the heart is."
I, for one, happen to agree.
Excellent flash fiction, Yvette.
~Dean

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Certainly the truth on this end as well, Sir Dean! :) Thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
reply by Dean Kuch on 21-May-2019
    You bet, Miss Yvette.
Comment from Bucketlist
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What a charming idea! It's better to have a loved one at home. The more I learn about those care facilities, the scarier the idea becomes. I think a lot of elderly placed in care actually die emotionally first. Your fiction shows a reality need in love.
Hugs,Trisha

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Trish -- thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
reply by Bucketlist on 22-May-2019
    You enjoy being a lady of leisure haha,you are always
    welcome
Comment from Dawn Munro
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This is a wonderful little story, so aptly illustrated with the photograph you chose too. Absolutely heartwarming, and as always, flawless. I bet it will do well with the judges. :)))

 Comment Written 20-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Lady Dawn, you are going to spoil me with those shiny objects there!! :) ;) Thank you, thank you... THANK YOU!! :) :) Those relationships that span the generations are priceless, I believe! :) ;) You know, it's been over 20 years since the Lord took my Maw-Maw home and I still miss her some times. :) Thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Take good care of you, ma'am! ;) Yvette :)
reply by Dawn Munro on 21-May-2019
    Nothing less than six stars would do for this little jewel, my friend. I'm just glad I had one!
Comment from Mastery
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Well done, Yvette. This will be a real contender in the contest I am sure. Your use of 75 words proves that much can be told in a few words that sometimes take others paragraph after paragraph to get to the story's end. Good Luck, my friend. Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 19-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this one, Bob -- thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
reply by Mastery on 21-May-2019
    You too, Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is certainly a bond when a generation is missed and I have the same bond with my grandchildren and I adore the time I spend with them too, your words are cunningly funny and cheeky, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    I think it's one of the best bonds there are -- still miss my grandmother something awful and that was decades ago, Dolly! :) So glad you enjoyed this one, ma'am -- thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Sally Law
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Precious! Paw paw knows where he needs to be. A well orchestrated plot. You did a great job with this, and all within 75 words,
All my best and in the contest, Yvette.
Sal xo

 Comment Written 19-May-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, Lady Sal -- thanx for dropping by to meet Scott and his Paw-Paw! :) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette :)