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Comment from tempeste
I guess men are wired in a certain way .. you talk, think, long for sex.
There are so many other thing in a friendship, partnership....yet your world rotates 99.9% around that.
The blue girl with the tail looks like a Na'vi from Avatar. Are you a sci-fic fan ?
I'm going to give you a six because I think you describe well the mentality of men no matter what context they finds themselves in.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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I guess men are wired in a certain way .. you talk, think, long for sex.
There are so many other thing in a friendship, partnership....yet your world rotates 99.9% around that.
The blue girl with the tail looks like a Na'vi from Avatar. Are you a sci-fic fan ?
I'm going to give you a six because I think you describe well the mentality of men no matter what context they finds themselves in.
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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CIAO TEMPESTE: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. Thank you for the six stars. Yes, men are wired in a certain way. But not all in the same way. There are men that respect God's women and honor them in the way that our God wants us to. That's why we feel that any other way is
encroachment, or to advance beyond proper limits...to trespass upon the rights of our women. Those are the men that gets turned away by our decent women...and rightly so. I expressed how I feel in my posting entitled: "Holy Bible + Holy Bible. Yes, Tempeste...I'm learning to be a sci-fic fan. I've found a reason to write about it. God bless you. Ciao, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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I'm a bit euphoric..
I don't think you saw the Eurovison Song Festival..Italy came second after Holland ..a double victory for me seeing my mamma was Dutch.
I hope you have a sunny Sunday Rhonnie.
I have never heard the word encroachment..I didn't know what it meant.
I'll check your Holy Bible + Holy Bible..
The guy that does your illustrations does a great job.
..let me know when your book is on sale on amazon I'll buy a copy for Ellis , my cousin's grandson..
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CIAO TEPESTE: You've got to tell me more about the Eurovision Song Festival. I have no idea what it is. Anything that makes you happy I want to know about. I'm gad you understand what I meant by encroachment.
Please let me know how you feel about my Bible+Bible poem. God bless you, Ciao Tempeste. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Bleeshor
Hahaha the genre of this poem is supposedly supernatural. But really it is through and through humor. The fan art drives home the point of the poem quite well
...you ain't staking no claims...it is a pleasing sugar pop
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Hahaha the genre of this poem is supposedly supernatural. But really it is through and through humor. The fan art drives home the point of the poem quite well
...you ain't staking no claims...it is a pleasing sugar pop
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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HELLO BLEESHOR: You understand this poem just as I wanted people to understand it. I'm a guy who feels that a man should respect a woman. And if he doesn't she should get him out of her face with the quickness. God bless you, dear lady. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from kahpot
Well for me there are so many ways to read this work, are we encroaching on someone else's turf? or are we being accepted for the efforts we put in? very intriguing and well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Well for me there are so many ways to read this work, are we encroaching on someone else's turf? or are we being accepted for the efforts we put in? very intriguing and well done****kahpot
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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HELLO KAHPOT: One way to read this is: That knucklehead guy needs to respect that lady. And she's doing right by letting him know that;... as soon as he approaches and disrespects her. God bless you, Kahpot. Cotdially: rhonnie69.
