Cascade of Pearls
A Kyrielle for the Repetition Contest13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle poem for the repeiticion contest. Pearls are precious and your repeating line has great impact to emphasize to keep it for the best.
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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A very well-written Kyrielle poem for the repeiticion contest. Pearls are precious and your repeating line has great impact to emphasize to keep it for the best.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback.
Comment from WryWriter
This is a lovely repetition poetic work. And the artwork is fantastic! The poem has great rhyming and flow. Enjoyed reading this very much.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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This is a lovely repetition poetic work. And the artwork is fantastic! The poem has great rhyming and flow. Enjoyed reading this very much.
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from nancyjam
This is a beautiful poem about love and how it
should be treasured as a rare pearl.
You use beautiful imagery to convey how kindness
and tender care will overcome any troubles so that
love will last.
Your repeating line is perfect and blends smoothly
into each stanza.
Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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This is a beautiful poem about love and how it
should be treasured as a rare pearl.
You use beautiful imagery to convey how kindness
and tender care will overcome any troubles so that
love will last.
Your repeating line is perfect and blends smoothly
into each stanza.
Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights, which were on point!
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this poem about old and cherished memories as pearls of great value that we keep with us. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest! Sometimes good memories are hard to recapture.
Bill
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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I like this poem about old and cherished memories as pearls of great value that we keep with us. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest! Sometimes good memories are hard to recapture.
Bill
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights, which were on point! Memories are like precious pearls.
Comment from heavenempress
Beautiful piece of poetry with well laid stanzas. The presentation is splendid and rich vocabulary. I enjoyed the rhyming it made the work flow and sweet to hear. I highly recommend your work to others. Good English command
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Beautiful piece of poetry with well laid stanzas. The presentation is splendid and rich vocabulary. I enjoyed the rhyming it made the work flow and sweet to hear. I highly recommend your work to others. Good English command
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging and insightful feedback !
Comment from LisaMay
I like this poem very much. From little beginnings, a seed of hope grows into something valuable that is cherished to the end. The poem has a lilting rhythm with good rhyming, and the repeat line fits seamlessly.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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I like this poem very much. From little beginnings, a seed of hope grows into something valuable that is cherished to the end. The poem has a lilting rhythm with good rhyming, and the repeat line fits seamlessly.
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review! I appreciate your insightful comments.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the comparison you've used with love and pearls. Both are very precious and of great value. They both do or can grow into something beautiful. The way you describe the process of how this growth occurs is superb. I like what you've done with this and how you've presented it and brought it forth. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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I like the comparison you've used with love and pearls. Both are very precious and of great value. They both do or can grow into something beautiful. The way you describe the process of how this growth occurs is superb. I like what you've done with this and how you've presented it and brought it forth. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Love is eternal and unconditional, uneasy to forget moments, we remember and cling to the blessed moments like lustrous pearls we like to keep for the best; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Love is eternal and unconditional, uneasy to forget moments, we remember and cling to the blessed moments like lustrous pearls we like to keep for the best; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The kryielle style worked well with your well chosen words. Your words flow smoothly with a great message. I like the comparison of the pearl to one's life/love. Great job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The kryielle style worked well with your well chosen words. Your words flow smoothly with a great message. I like the comparison of the pearl to one's life/love. Great job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Real natural pearls never lose their lustre, but when it comes to love then it is a different matter. Remembering the good times in your poem here, good luck with he contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Real natural pearls never lose their lustre, but when it comes to love then it is a different matter. Remembering the good times in your poem here, good luck with he contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Good point about natural pearls, Dolly. Have revised accordingly. Thank you for the tip!
