Of Mermaids and Monsters
A Loop Poem on a Writer's Imagination18 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What perfect entry for the contest! I love how you take the reader through all the wonderful fantasy worlds and your stanzas progress from imagination, reading and then writing! Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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What perfect entry for the contest! I love how you take the reader through all the wonderful fantasy worlds and your stanzas progress from imagination, reading and then writing! Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a wonderful loop poem which describes a lot of the fantasy charaters that inspire writing. Which include the muses of mythlogy that your artwork came from.You are right that things that are not penned are not remembered.
Congrats on the well deserved win in the contest,
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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This is a wonderful loop poem which describes a lot of the fantasy charaters that inspire writing. Which include the muses of mythlogy that your artwork came from.You are right that things that are not penned are not remembered.
Congrats on the well deserved win in the contest,
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging words. It means a lot to be supported!
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You're welcome. That is why we are here. To support each other.
Joan
Comment from Miranda Langston
I can absolutely see why this won the Loop Poetry Contest. this is some truly fantastic poetry. I love the allusion to Alice In Wonderland, as well. keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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I can absolutely see why this won the Loop Poetry Contest. this is some truly fantastic poetry. I love the allusion to Alice In Wonderland, as well. keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Than you again!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much! I am truly humbled and honored at the same time.
Comment from Joan E.
What a fascinating artwork and theme about writers' imaginations! I enjoyed your flowing, Loop Poem and alliteration of "w's, h's, m's and d's". Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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What a fascinating artwork and theme about writers' imaginations! I enjoyed your flowing, Loop Poem and alliteration of "w's, h's, m's and d's". Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights. I especially appreciate the generous rating!
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. The last line is the crux of your poem for me:
"Dragons who dwell deep in the caverns of a writer's mind"
To explore the places where our muse leads us is bravery and we often find a good story/poem there. Your loop poem is interesting and innovative. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Hi June. The last line is the crux of your poem for me:
"Dragons who dwell deep in the caverns of a writer's mind"
To explore the places where our muse leads us is bravery and we often find a good story/poem there. Your loop poem is interesting and innovative. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Stepping out of my comfort zone a little and just went with the flow. Living on the coast here in Massachusetts it?s easy to get into myths and legends of sea monsters and witches! Thanks for sharing your insightful comments.
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I know. I grew up not far from Salem, MA.
Comment from Aussie
Your photo compliments your Loop Poetry. I wish you well in the contest. Loved the poem - so true. Brought back memories of the nineteen women hanged in Salem. They found out it was LSD from harvesting corn that was infected. Such a loss of life. A very well written poem with much mystery and interest. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Your photo compliments your Loop Poetry. I wish you well in the contest. Loved the poem - so true. Brought back memories of the nineteen women hanged in Salem. They found out it was LSD from harvesting corn that was infected. Such a loss of life. A very well written poem with much mystery and interest. Well done poet.
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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So glad you understood the history of the poem! Thanks for sharing your insights!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem about mermaids and dragons that is created by imagination, and we can take it to any possible scenario we can possibly think about.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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A very well-written loop poem about mermaids and dragons that is created by imagination, and we can take it to any possible scenario we can possibly think about.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you! Your insights are on point.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The use of metaphors throughout this poem enhances the rhythm and cadence. It holds a rather mysterious theme that makes me wonder how deep your meaning.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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The use of metaphors throughout this poem enhances the rhythm and cadence. It holds a rather mysterious theme that makes me wonder how deep your meaning.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights. This can be as deep as you are willing to delve. Plumbing the depths of our memory banks can loosen bits and pieces long buried to float up and enhance our creativity as writers. I live near Essex where old New England sailors have claimed for centuries to have seen sea monsters and work in Salem where they used to hang witches for simple wearing lace. I just went with the flow and the result was this loop poem.
Comment from Irish Rain
Awesome loop poem Miss June.
I love the way it comes down to
the writer, the creator of all that
we could possibly imagine.
A stunning picture too!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Awesome loop poem Miss June.
I love the way it comes down to
the writer, the creator of all that
we could possibly imagine.
A stunning picture too!
Blessings...
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thanks for stopping by to read and review. I work in Salem and live near Essex here in Massachusetts. So, we're surrounded by old New England tales of witches, serpents and have actually worked on an historical site reputed to be haunted by the sheriff who hung the witches. So, lots of food for here for creative writing!
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I would LOVE that! I used to live on Otis AFB near Falmouth! Loved the area!
