"Painted Visions"
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3 total reviews
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, Good prologue for your book "Painted Visions." I look forward to reading the chapters that you write so well, in all your books, though sometimes difficult to understand. Dove
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Dear Ricky, Good prologue for your book "Painted Visions." I look forward to reading the chapters that you write so well, in all your books, though sometimes difficult to understand. Dove
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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Thanks for your final review and have a blessed day dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Sandra Montanino
You've written a very moving piece and I can tell you put a lot of effort in it. I would suggest that you don't need so many quotation marks. The same person seems to be doing all the talking, so you don't need quotations for every sentence. I see you are ranked in the #50 spot. Best of luck in your writing.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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You've written a very moving piece and I can tell you put a lot of effort in it. I would suggest that you don't need so many quotation marks. The same person seems to be doing all the talking, so you don't need quotations for every sentence. I see you are ranked in the #50 spot. Best of luck in your writing.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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My thanks for your fine review and concern Sandra on my writing abilities. But I think it's that Strathmore's and Covington's Who's Who's feel otherwise.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We look forward to your painted visions Ricky and if you intend writing a book you will have to stop putting all your phrases in inverted commas. I have mentioned this before to you. Inverted commas are used for dialogue. If you could take them out your work would read better and you will obtain more reviews from the readers on Fanstory. We all learn here and have to abide by the rules when it comes to grammar and punctuation, hard lessons learned, but you will certainly grow if you take it on board, best of luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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We look forward to your painted visions Ricky and if you intend writing a book you will have to stop putting all your phrases in inverted commas. I have mentioned this before to you. Inverted commas are used for dialogue. If you could take them out your work would read better and you will obtain more reviews from the readers on Fanstory. We all learn here and have to abide by the rules when it comes to grammar and punctuation, hard lessons learned, but you will certainly grow if you take it on board, best of luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for your fine review Dolly.
And remember we each have our own unique abilities...
'When it comes to the writing fields.'
"And, that's what makes us exceptional...
"And, sometimes unusual."
Dr. Ricky 1024