Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Evening"Colors of each of the 4
7 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH so nice, you took us through a trip in twilight and gave us a few of the peaceful parts, the rays of the moon mixed with the sun, the birds and fireflies leading to the silence. Nice minute poem
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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OH so nice, you took us through a trip in twilight and gave us a few of the peaceful parts, the rays of the moon mixed with the sun, the birds and fireflies leading to the silence. Nice minute poem
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I?m so glad you enjoyed the trip! I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about the sun setting and night time ever seems to come alive when the fireflies switch their lights on when the last beams of sunlight disappear.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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A very well-written minute poem about the sun setting and night time ever seems to come alive when the fireflies switch their lights on when the last beams of sunlight disappear.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The brought the scene of the glittering fireflies here Trisha and it is special because I have never seen a firefly before, I wish you luck with our minute poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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The brought the scene of the glittering fireflies here Trisha and it is special because I have never seen a firefly before, I wish you luck with our minute poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Glad you enjoyed the entry, thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness, Trisha -- I can almost feel the night closing in around ... you've done what I would love to see more do with the minute: paint a scene for the reader to walk into! :) ;) Thanx for sharing, ma'am, and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Oh my goodness, Trisha -- I can almost feel the night closing in around ... you've done what I would love to see more do with the minute: paint a scene for the reader to walk into! :) ;) Thanx for sharing, ma'am, and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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What a lovely review! You are so positive about my poetry, I am honored! Thank you
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Michele Harber
I love the beautiful picture that you paint, and the tranquil mood that you set. The image heightens your descriptive words and, of course, you perfectly followed the line and syllable requirements of the Minute Poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I love the beautiful picture that you paint, and the tranquil mood that you set. The image heightens your descriptive words and, of course, you perfectly followed the line and syllable requirements of the Minute Poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I?m so happy you enjoyed my minute poem. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Moonlight makes more impressive sight than the evening twilight when the night sky gets clear as stars reappear; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Moonlight makes more impressive sight than the evening twilight when the night sky gets clear as stars reappear; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
You did a good job with this Minute poem. I especially like twilight when the fireflies come out. We call them lightning bugs down here. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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You did a good job with this Minute poem. I especially like twilight when the fireflies come out. We call them lightning bugs down here. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha