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Publicity Call.

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Comment from rspoet
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Hello Rhonnie,
Doesn't bode well for the marriage if they're bored on the honeymoon.
Unfortunately, the reality of many relationships that have little in common.
The title and inscription are necessary for the meaning to come through
Perhaps they could be included in the poem somehow.
Good art work to match
Nicely done
Robert


 Comment Written 14-May-2019


reply by the author on 17-May-2019
    HELLO RSPOET: Thank you. You understand what I am saying here. Thank you for your suggestion concerning the inscription and the title. All positive help is appreciated. God bless you.Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Kamisah Karim
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Search me. I don't get it. Very sorry. Kind of a funny statement to make too. They must have been on a honeymoon for so long to be bored. I always feel sad even if it's the end of a holiday..Well, we are all different. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-May-2019


reply by the author on 17-May-2019
    HELLO KAMISAH: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by Kamisah Karim on 17-May-2019
    You are welcome.