Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Mothers's Day."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from Kamisah Karim
I think that you are trying to show how a mother sacrifices for her family in your poem.The car is broken but mom went to the market nevertheless to get dinner for her family. For the love for her family. You used a dialogue in your poem. Interestingly, a short dialogue can still present your idea of a mother's love.Good job rhonnie. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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I think that you are trying to show how a mother sacrifices for her family in your poem.The car is broken but mom went to the market nevertheless to get dinner for her family. For the love for her family. You used a dialogue in your poem. Interestingly, a short dialogue can still present your idea of a mother's love.Good job rhonnie. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 18-May-2019
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HELLO KAMISAH: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Hello back at you.You are very welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
Who says that moms don't like to use the bike. :) That is a mom that loves her children. Many people nowadays can't cross the street without getting on their horse. That is why we have many people out of phase with life. Thank you for sharing your love.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Who says that moms don't like to use the bike. :) That is a mom that loves her children. Many people nowadays can't cross the street without getting on their horse. That is why we have many people out of phase with life. Thank you for sharing your love.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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HELLO POETWATCH: I love this review. Thank you, my friend. You certainly know what time it is. Thank you for sharing, your love, poetwatch. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
