A Parting Romance
A 2-4-2 poem.5 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
This is a wonderful posting...I love the seascape because it exudes such a soothing feel. You nailed this poem and I know I would have voted for it. I think it is a special entry.
This is a wonderful posting...I love the seascape because it exudes such a soothing feel. You nailed this poem and I know I would have voted for it. I think it is a special entry.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Well geeze I think we are looking at a winner Lobber. Very clever and you couldn't get much nearer to getting a real picture from your carefully selected words.
Good luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Well geeze I think we are looking at a winner Lobber. Very clever and you couldn't get much nearer to getting a real picture from your carefully selected words.
Good luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 13-May-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Lobber. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line and the great picture.
I believe 'goodby' should be 'goodbye'.
Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
You did a good job with your contest entry, Lobber. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line and the great picture.
I believe 'goodby' should be 'goodbye'.
Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Good evening,
Thank you for your kind words and helping me to repair the poem. I appreciate your support. - Lobber
Comment from Teri7
This is a six star 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. Your words and the lovely art work went very well together. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
This is a six star 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. Your words and the lovely art work went very well together. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Hello,
Thank you for your support, 6 stars and encouraging comments....much appreciated. - Lobber
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Lobber.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of
one continuous thought.
-Good personification of
the ripples, and effective
imagery as they depart.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
-Very nice image and
presentation, Lobber.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of
one continuous thought.
-Good personification of
the ripples, and effective
imagery as they depart.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Hello,
Thank you for your support and encouraging comments. - Lobber
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You are welcome.