Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

This is a wonderful posting...I love the seascape because it exudes such a soothing feel. You nailed this poem and I know I would have voted for it. I think it is a special entry.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well geeze I think we are looking at a winner Lobber. Very clever and you couldn't get much nearer to getting a real picture from your carefully selected words.

Good luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-May-2019

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with your contest entry, Lobber. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line and the great picture.

I believe 'goodby' should be 'goodbye'.

Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 12-May-2019

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reply by the author on 12-May-2019

Good evening,
Thank you for your kind words and helping me to repair the poem. I appreciate your support. - Lobber

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a six star 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. Your words and the lovely art work went very well together. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri

 Comment Written 12-May-2019

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reply by the author on 12-May-2019

Hello,
Thank you for your support, 6 stars and encouraging comments....much appreciated. - Lobber

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and
presentation, Lobber.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of
one continuous thought.
-Good personification of
the ripples, and effective
imagery as they depart.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2019

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reply by the author on 12-May-2019

Hello,
Thank you for your support and encouraging comments. - Lobber

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-May-2019

You are welcome.