I'm Feeling Slothy
Deadly Sins contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, a real funny piece of work. it really proved the point of sloth. I liked the creative style of displaying. Nice image and I know if it was not sloth you could have split the poetry into stanzas hahaha....All the best.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hi, a real funny piece of work. it really proved the point of sloth. I liked the creative style of displaying. Nice image and I know if it was not sloth you could have split the poetry into stanzas hahaha....All the best.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, HE. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I'm laughing because I started to bypass this, then it suddenly occurred to me to look at your title once again, and I was like 'dang! he/she nailed 'slothy' (LOL). You got me ... great job! Best wishes in the contest :)
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I'm laughing because I started to bypass this, then it suddenly occurred to me to look at your title once again, and I was like 'dang! he/she nailed 'slothy' (LOL). You got me ... great job! Best wishes in the contest :)
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Gale. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from WryWriter
I would say you covered "Sloth" pretty well in this poem. The photograph goes well with its theme. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I would say you covered "Sloth" pretty well in this poem. The photograph goes well with its theme. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Wry W. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a treat to read about myself on this particular day - well written and so representative of the trials and inadequacies of writing, now and then - smooth, almost lyrical free verse - that complies fully with the prompt - I really liked this one, probably because I could so readily relate - my best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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In my opinion, a treat to read about myself on this particular day - well written and so representative of the trials and inadequacies of writing, now and then - smooth, almost lyrical free verse - that complies fully with the prompt - I really liked this one, probably because I could so readily relate - my best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Eve. I appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are very welcome indeed, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from susand3022
Hahahahaha!!! Dear Author, I love this entry on Slothiness!!! It's the epitome of Sloth! Well, at least you managed to get it in on time! Most Slothy people might not make it... lol Nicely done :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hahahahaha!!! Dear Author, I love this entry on Slothiness!!! It's the epitome of Sloth! Well, at least you managed to get it in on time! Most Slothy people might not make it... lol Nicely done :)
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Susand. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Perfect analogy. That is slothful. You hit all the nails on their heads.
The deadly sin of sloth can creep in unnoticed so easily and take it's time letting you know it's there.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Perfect analogy. That is slothful. You hit all the nails on their heads.
The deadly sin of sloth can creep in unnoticed so easily and take it's time letting you know it's there.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Raffaelina. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from LyndaS
Waaaaaa! You poor thing. LOL This is really well crafted, poet. Love your take on sloth. Just too damn bored and tired to put any effort into this post. Too funny! I think you made your point brilliantly. This is great. Love the art. LOL!!! This made me laugh. A really good job here. Good luck in the contest, though you may not give a damn enough to even follow it in the booth. Lynda
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Waaaaaa! You poor thing. LOL This is really well crafted, poet. Love your take on sloth. Just too damn bored and tired to put any effort into this post. Too funny! I think you made your point brilliantly. This is great. Love the art. LOL!!! This made me laugh. A really good job here. Good luck in the contest, though you may not give a damn enough to even follow it in the booth. Lynda
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lynda. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle out of this silliness. I was just in one of those moods. Lol. Have a great night.
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Any time, slug.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Oh please, please let this one win. lol
That's some 'method' poetry right there on the screen and meets the requirements.
Good luck
GMG
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi there,
Oh please, please let this one win. lol
That's some 'method' poetry right there on the screen and meets the requirements.
Good luck
GMG
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, GMG. I appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Comment from LisaMay
...and I bet your bed is a mess, you won't have washed the sheets for weeks, there's crap all over your bedroom floor that you haven't put away (your floordrobe)... if you go to the kitchen to get a drink, there's dishes in the sink etc etc. I know a fellow sloth when I see one... haha
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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...and I bet your bed is a mess, you won't have washed the sheets for weeks, there's crap all over your bedroom floor that you haven't put away (your floordrobe)... if you go to the kitchen to get a drink, there's dishes in the sink etc etc. I know a fellow sloth when I see one... haha
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Hahaha. Am I that transparent? Thank you for the fantastic review, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a lazy day. Lol.