Controlling the Media Narrative
She made the name for herself...7 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Peterperson, I guess, would have been a better alternative. But this is definitely a term I have never heard. But thanks to you -and this perfect picture you discovered for it!- it will be ensconced in my brain forever. Good luck to you in this contest! xo
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Peterperson, I guess, would have been a better alternative. But this is definitely a term I have never heard. But thanks to you -and this perfect picture you discovered for it!- it will be ensconced in my brain forever. Good luck to you in this contest! xo
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thanx for your review, Rachelle. ;)
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent entry to the obscure word 7-9-7 poetic contest. Your internal rhyme, sibilance and consonance, is excellent. Peterman, from several viewpoints, is a sexist word. But, it may come the Latin salpetra or British saltpetre which was used as an explosive. There is no need to go into other recorded uses. The curious may look in Naval histories of voyages of a year or more. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This is an excellent entry to the obscure word 7-9-7 poetic contest. Your internal rhyme, sibilance and consonance, is excellent. Peterman, from several viewpoints, is a sexist word. But, it may come the Latin salpetra or British saltpetre which was used as an explosive. There is no need to go into other recorded uses. The curious may look in Naval histories of voyages of a year or more. Well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Henry, and your informative comments. So glad you enjoyed. ;)
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a fun poem. In just three short lines you have created an engaging character with a dash of bravado. The ending makes the reader smile and root for the thief.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This is a fun poem. In just three short lines you have created an engaging character with a dash of bravado. The ending makes the reader smile and root for the thief.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, James. ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
:))) Oh, how clever! I loved this little gem. I hope it does well in the booth -- I think it will be VERY hard to beat, perhaps impossible, not unlike the safe-cracking "Lady Lock" - hahahaha!
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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:))) Oh, how clever! I loved this little gem. I hope it does well in the booth -- I think it will be VERY hard to beat, perhaps impossible, not unlike the safe-cracking "Lady Lock" - hahahaha!
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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LOL! :) Thanx for the compliments, Dawn, but I pretty much know when you don't do something 'flowery' or 'hearwarming', it will most likely not place high, but, hey! a girl's gotta have some fun, yeah?! ;) ;) And when I ran across this one, I just couldn't pass it up! ;) ;) Thanx again, Beautiful Lady, and take care of you and Prissy! ;) ;) Yvette
I promise to try to start catching up on reviews.... soon?....maybe? :) ;) :)
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:))) I RARELY enter a booth.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 7-9-7 obscure word poem. To pick safe locks are a very delicate professional job, the ones who can do it will often do it for their own pocket to empty the safe with anything in it.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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A very well-written 7-9-7 obscure word poem. To pick safe locks are a very delicate professional job, the ones who can do it will often do it for their own pocket to empty the safe with anything in it.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for your review on this one, Sandra -- I so very much appreciate your support of my work, ma'am!! ;) :) Take care over there!
**My apologies for being so tardy in my reply! I actually managed to post but not much of anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking some time with tea this morning before life takes over again) and the weekend of moving sons is not finished -- all my grades are in, though - hooray!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great Sunday! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bleeshor
Learned a new word, Peterman, wonder how that came to be? Checked to see the poem met the
7-9-7 syllables
Structured requirement
And read a fun finger in your eye ode to male and female safe crackers. May lady lock keep smiling on all of you.
I would say you squared all the corners with this one.
Well done
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Learned a new word, Peterman, wonder how that came to be? Checked to see the poem met the
7-9-7 syllables
Structured requirement
And read a fun finger in your eye ode to male and female safe crackers. May lady lock keep smiling on all of you.
I would say you squared all the corners with this one.
Well done
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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So glad it sounds like this made you smile! ;) Thank you for your review.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and I learned a new word! Or should it be perterwoman? He he he, this is an inventive write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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He he he, this made me smile and I learned a new word! Or should it be perterwoman? He he he, this is an inventive write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
