A Novel Experience
25 Syllable Poem Contest Entry16 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This is a lovely combination of illustration and words. Our imagination is enhanced, triggered, validated, by reading what others have written, then taking flight or tiger-riding on our own account.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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This is a lovely combination of illustration and words. Our imagination is enhanced, triggered, validated, by reading what others have written, then taking flight or tiger-riding on our own account.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Lisa. I really just wanted to use this cool pic I came across, lol. I appreciate the gracious stars, L. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
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I sure did.
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-syllable poem, A Novel Experience, has the required syllable count and opens up door after door of possibilities unlimited by probability.
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This twenty-five-syllable poem, A Novel Experience, has the required syllable count and opens up door after door of possibilities unlimited by probability.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Bill.
Comment from WryWriter
I count 25 syllables as per writing prompt requirements in this fabulous poetic work! The artwork choice is equally astounding. Great job!!
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I count 25 syllables as per writing prompt requirements in this fabulous poetic work! The artwork choice is equally astounding. Great job!!
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Wry. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from karenina
Nice. I am fairly sure I was born with a book in my hand and your twenty five word poem speaks of the limitless experiences available to anyone who learns to read...I so agree!--Karenina
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Nice. I am fairly sure I was born with a book in my hand and your twenty five word poem speaks of the limitless experiences available to anyone who learns to read...I so agree!--Karenina
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Karenina. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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Really enjoyed the read! --Karenina
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I couldn't resist the
great tiger image!
-A good presentation
and syllable count.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-I like your topic and
your poem, as well as the title.
-I also like the images you chose
to show the imagination and
creativity that comes from reading.
-A strong contender; good luck.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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-I couldn't resist the
great tiger image!
-A good presentation
and syllable count.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-I like your topic and
your poem, as well as the title.
-I also like the images you chose
to show the imagination and
creativity that comes from reading.
-A strong contender; good luck.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Pam. I really appreciate the gracious stars. The art actually inspired this is. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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You are very welcome. The art was stunning. Have a great rest of your weekend, too. It is raining and chilly here!
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That's a bummer. I'm getting ready to go out and jump in my pool. It's a beautiful day in Tampa today. Happy Mom's day despite the rain and chill.
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Yes, it is a bummer, but we had a beautiful day yesterday in NJ! Enjoy Tampa, and thanks for the Mother's Day wishes.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It does seem that the right kind of writing does transport us into situations and places with unlimited possibilities as you've so eloquently stated. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done!
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It does seem that the right kind of writing does transport us into situations and places with unlimited possibilities as you've so eloquently stated. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done!
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Jeffrey. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from dragonpoet
Well written poem about the imagination and the effect of reading on it. It sounds like you read fantasy books. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Well written poem about the imagination and the effect of reading on it. It sounds like you read fantasy books. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dragonpoet. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. have a great weekend.
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You're welcome on both accounts.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty-five syllable poem about reading a novel, where we are taken up by each page that takes us into the midst of the adventure the writer writes about.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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A very well-written twenty-five syllable poem about reading a novel, where we are taken up by each page that takes us into the midst of the adventure the writer writes about.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from LyndaS
This is a beautiful contest entry, author. You've done quite a bit and made excellent use of your 25 syllables. A powerful message to expand your mind by reading. Nice art as well. This is a winner. Good luck. Lynda
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This is a beautiful contest entry, author. You've done quite a bit and made excellent use of your 25 syllables. A powerful message to expand your mind by reading. Nice art as well. This is a winner. Good luck. Lynda
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Lynda. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I like your little squirrel pic. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a great weekend.
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Any time. It deserved the stars. Beautiful write. And why aren't sleeping?
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Here you have expressed your experience in 25 syllables; each page you read reveals a magical universe of unlimited universe, well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
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Here you have expressed your experience in 25 syllables; each page you read reveals a magical universe of unlimited universe, well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Al. I'm glad you liked the piece.
