Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twenty-five-syllable poem, Somewhere Barefoot, has the required syllable count and sends us back to the tiny. tender feet that crossed pavement and sand like hot coals.

 Comment Written 11-May-2019

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reply by the author on 11-May-2019

Thanks for reading and responding to my thoughts!

Comment from karenina

Excellent

The sea shore can cure my every ailment and lift every emotion...they really were magical days and you get my vote for taking me back! Oh, to find some beach glass, stare at the waves...perfect joy!--Karenina

 Comment Written 10-May-2019

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reply by the author on 11-May-2019

Thanks so much for reading and positively responding to my thoughts!!!

reply by karenina on 11-May-2019

You triggered all of my treasured sea side memories!--Karenia

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Poet remembers those childhood days when he enjoyed, excited, magically to walk barefoot simple ways, even in summer; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-May-2019

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reply by the author on 10-May-2019

Thanks for responding. I do appreciate it.

Comment from James W. Reynolds

Excellent

This poem is evocative. I like the image of sticking your toes in the sand and walking back to your childhood. It's wonderful and effective. If only summers were endless.

 Comment Written 09-May-2019

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reply by the author on 10-May-2019

Thanks for reading and responding