Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twenty-five-syllable poem, Punch Drunk, has the required syllable count and seems to point to a particular hunk bunch who are punch drunk.

 Comment Written 11-May-2019

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reply by the author on 11-May-2019

Yes, a very special group that often reminds me of beer brawl when they gather. Thanks for the clever review, j

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

You should see them when they get into loco weed. Talking about punch drunk, a small phrase for the real thing. Hope you win the contest. I see nothing wrong.

 Comment Written 09-May-2019

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reply by the author on 09-May-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. I think that I have seen enough from those guys at those rallies. Scary. Cheers.

Comment from Eric M McChesney

Excellent

A very creative write. Very powerful, the images that are spawned from your perfectly chosen vocabulary was astounding. Loved the image that you chose, just perfect. Great Job and best of luck with this write.

 Comment Written 09-May-2019

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reply by the author on 09-May-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. Those rallies are scary and will haunt America for years to come, cheers.