Comment from heavenempress

Excellent

Hi, nice piece of poetry. Beautiful Crucifix and I enjoyed too the few meaningful words. Nice presentation. spiritual uplifting words. I choose him too, only God. I highly recommend your work to others.

 Comment Written 09-May-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thank you for your excellent review, kind words and stars.

Comment from BlueTiger

Excellent

Good work on this poem. My only suggestion would be to capitalize the 'h' in 'Him'. Not only will it make it clearer that you're referring to God, but it will balance your poem visually as 'God' is also capitalized in the first line.
Best of luck on the contest,
-BT

 Comment Written 08-May-2019

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reply by the author on 08-May-2019

EXCELLENT SUGGESTION, DONE.

Comment from Kamisah Karim

Excellent

I love this poem.I choose God too in my dealings.If we choose God, we will never stray from the right path.He laid out the good and the bad, therefore, we can always be sure of the right solution for our problems.
In 6 words, you have stated the ultimate truth to how we should live our lives. May God bless you always..

 Comment Written 08-May-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thank you for your kind words and stars. They are very much appreciated.