Evening
Poem 3/5/33 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi Zanya, This is a really prettily done 3-5-3. The words in your poem are so perfectly depicting that picture, it's very elegant... the way the moon seems to 'hang' in the sky there. And you can tell it's evening by the colors. Just beautiful. :)
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Hi Zanya, This is a really prettily done 3-5-3. The words in your poem are so perfectly depicting that picture, it's very elegant... the way the moon seems to 'hang' in the sky there. And you can tell it's evening by the colors. Just beautiful. :)
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Superb review -much appreciated zanya
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes it does, poet. Love the sunset no matter where I roam. This is a good entry. I find nothing wrong. Thanks for sharing. Best to you, I hope you win.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Yes it does, poet. Love the sunset no matter where I roam. This is a good entry. I find nothing wrong. Thanks for sharing. Best to you, I hope you win.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from BlueTiger
Great work on this piece. Short pieces like this are difficult to write, but I think your word choice was perfect. Also liked the subtle alliteration of 'elegantly' and 'evening'. Best of luck on the contest,
-BT
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Great work on this piece. Short pieces like this are difficult to write, but I think your word choice was perfect. Also liked the subtle alliteration of 'elegantly' and 'evening'. Best of luck on the contest,
-BT
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Superb review for this little poem..zanya