Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Metamorphosis"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from dragonpoet
This seems to be the path to a strong career. But at the end it seems computers take over for those who know their jobs the best. It should stop so people can retain jobs and their way of life. We need to stop relying on technology so much or it might come to it controlling us.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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This seems to be the path to a strong career. But at the end it seems computers take over for those who know their jobs the best. It should stop so people can retain jobs and their way of life. We need to stop relying on technology so much or it might come to it controlling us.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanks, dragonpoet.
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You're welcome, Aiona.
Joan
Comment from susand3022
You quit your job??? What were you doing? What do you want to do? (I think I know, but one can always be incorrect...) What was it you wanted to be doing before they were making you jump through incessant hoops? (Don't you just love bureaucrats?) ... Oh yeah... there's a poem up there isn't there...
Well, s*** girl... that's kind of brilliant... :)
You can take that in more than one way, it's a very provocative poem. Next stage, Automation... After that, STOP... We'll be done. I wonder how long Automation will last? I doubt it will last as long as the ones before it. As a species, that will be it for us. We're rushing head-long into Automation now. Scary...
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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You quit your job??? What were you doing? What do you want to do? (I think I know, but one can always be incorrect...) What was it you wanted to be doing before they were making you jump through incessant hoops? (Don't you just love bureaucrats?) ... Oh yeah... there's a poem up there isn't there...
Well, s*** girl... that's kind of brilliant... :)
You can take that in more than one way, it's a very provocative poem. Next stage, Automation... After that, STOP... We'll be done. I wonder how long Automation will last? I doubt it will last as long as the ones before it. As a species, that will be it for us. We're rushing head-long into Automation now. Scary...
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you, susand3022. Long story. Maybe I'll write about it. Your instincts are correct.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And what a wonderful feeling of freedom is found in that four-letter word at the end!! ;) ;) Loved your contest entry as I believe it is the natural progression for those of us that step into a job to help but get mired in the &^%$#@#*! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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And what a wonderful feeling of freedom is found in that four-letter word at the end!! ;) ;) Loved your contest entry as I believe it is the natural progression for those of us that step into a job to help but get mired in the &^%$#@#*! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thanks, Y.M.Roger.
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Metamorphosis, has the required half a dozen words and tells a history of skilled labor which brings a person from knowing nothing to expertise. Then, one stops growing or is replaced by robot.
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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This six-word poem, Metamorphosis, has the required half a dozen words and tells a history of skilled labor which brings a person from knowing nothing to expertise. Then, one stops growing or is replaced by robot.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Hmm... Interesting interpretation. I thought the master became the robot. But yeah... yours makes more sense. :)