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A Carnal Victory

Yes, nature has its cruel mistresses as well...

11 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Excellent
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A very well-written poem of stacked 5-7-5 poem about the birds and the bees that think they are taking it all from the flower but indeed actually ensure the future existence of the flowers species.

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 Comment Written 06-May-2019


reply by the author on 06-May-2019
    Thank you for your review. :)