Romancing the Music
A 2-4-2 Contest Offering18 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
I have to be honest. I do not love the picture,because it looked like fire at first. No offense:) I might use softer, happier colors for dancing. I probably would six this with a different pic:)
I LOVE your words! Even more, the whole world of thought it opens up, is amazing for so few words to have opened it. It makes me want to dance and appreciate life's song! It's like you are saying dancing is embracing and loving your life.
Very well written and meaningful poem!
Tina
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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I have to be honest. I do not love the picture,because it looked like fire at first. No offense:) I might use softer, happier colors for dancing. I probably would six this with a different pic:)
I LOVE your words! Even more, the whole world of thought it opens up, is amazing for so few words to have opened it. It makes me want to dance and appreciate life's song! It's like you are saying dancing is embracing and loving your life.
Very well written and meaningful poem!
Tina
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your comments, Tina -- love the honesty, Beautiful Lady!! ;) And I went back and forth between the reds and the blues/aquas and ended up with the reds...think it has to do with life right now!! :) ;) Emotions are what I speak through my poetry and, yeah, lots of stressful reds right now!! ;) ;) I am glad you enjoyed the poem -- those words mean a lot to me! :) ;) You take care out there, Lady T -- blessings across the miles! ;) ;) Yvette
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We will just say you
are salsa dancing, lol.
A fiery dance:) Your
talent a d big heart
make you a winner in
my book!
Comment from Shirley McLain
love your poem. It's very meaningful and easy to understand. The background is great. I have always like bright colors. I wish you luck in the contest and have a wonderful day.
Shirley
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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love your poem. It's very meaningful and easy to understand. The background is great. I have always like bright colors. I wish you luck in the contest and have a wonderful day.
Shirley
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Shirley. ;)
Comment from aryr
I enjoyed the picture you used Yvette, it truly complimented your contest entry. The choice of words enhanced the beauty of the words and truly expanded the thoughts of ones mind.
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I enjoyed the picture you used Yvette, it truly complimented your contest entry. The choice of words enhanced the beauty of the words and truly expanded the thoughts of ones mind.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much, Ali, and glad the coloration came across alright....I always worry that the colors will look very different on different computer monitors! ;) ;) I was introduced to dancing when I was three and never let it go!! ;) :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very nice entry! You should garner positive reviews for it.
Like how your verse is matched perfectly with your selected illustration.
But I can't name that song in two notes. LOL
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Very nice entry! You should garner positive reviews for it.
Like how your verse is matched perfectly with your selected illustration.
But I can't name that song in two notes. LOL
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much, Mark -- was introduced to dancing when I was three and never let it go!! ;) :)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This has a wonderful presentation, with a 'Dance Abstract' image, and the black background with gradual colored letters, which are centered. The sentiment is moving. An excellent message, with great choices of words to display it. I have always loved to watch an expressive dance, by those who move about freely, with no inhibitions. Thank you for sharing your talent for expression.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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This has a wonderful presentation, with a 'Dance Abstract' image, and the black background with gradual colored letters, which are centered. The sentiment is moving. An excellent message, with great choices of words to display it. I have always loved to watch an expressive dance, by those who move about freely, with no inhibitions. Thank you for sharing your talent for expression.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much, Jesse -- you know, I was introduced to dancing when I was three and never let it go!! ;) :) It's one of my 'fall back' excercises for stress relief and it just naturally flowed into this one! ;) ;) Thanx again for the wonderful comments -- you always have a way of making me smile! ;) :)
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I'm always glad to bring a smile to someone's face. Dancing is a great exercise for stress relief! Feeling limber leads to relaxation.
Jesse
Comment from Randa Dayle
You can dance! You can sing! You can write poetry! I love your 2-4-2 poetry entry. Good luck in all you do and continue to write and share and bring us happiness.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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You can dance! You can sing! You can write poetry! I love your 2-4-2 poetry entry. Good luck in all you do and continue to write and share and bring us happiness.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Randa! ;)
Comment from Sally Law
The vibrant colors set this 2-4-2 in motion and spun me around. A final offering for the upcoming contest. I see you're still flowing in your creative juices even at years end.
Always my best to you and yours, Sally xo
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The vibrant colors set this 2-4-2 in motion and spun me around. A final offering for the upcoming contest. I see you're still flowing in your creative juices even at years end.
Always my best to you and yours, Sally xo
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much, Lady Sal -- was introduced to dancing when I was three and never let it go!! ;) :)
Comment from Rmocruz
You have cleverly presented a valid, positive message in seven simple words. The abstract artwork selection is quite busy dancing.
This 2-4-2 contest entry looks promising.
Best wishes!
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You have cleverly presented a valid, positive message in seven simple words. The abstract artwork selection is quite busy dancing.
This 2-4-2 contest entry looks promising.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much, RM -- was introduced to dancing when I was three and never let it go!! ;) :)
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. When we hear the music of life we need to fall into rhythm and dance along of fall off the path and see how others go on without you, if you want to be part of the music you need to be willing to dance.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. When we hear the music of life we need to fall into rhythm and dance along of fall off the path and see how others go on without you, if you want to be part of the music you need to be willing to dance.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much, Sandra -- was introduced to dancing when I was three and never let it go!! ;) :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, you KNOW I had to love THIS one!! It's playing my song in all the ways that appeal to me most: dance, songs, and, sure, I'll go for the cheap joke here, CARESSING!!! Plus I just love what you did with the colored font. This looks like a front-runner to me, my sweet friend!! Good luck! xo
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Well, you KNOW I had to love THIS one!! It's playing my song in all the ways that appeal to me most: dance, songs, and, sure, I'll go for the cheap joke here, CARESSING!!! Plus I just love what you did with the colored font. This looks like a front-runner to me, my sweet friend!! Good luck! xo
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Rachelle and those lovely stars are WONDERFUL!! :) ;) Like you, dancing is just such a rush for me any time...to any kind of music... haven't danced 'formally' in decades but just the slightest mood swing or the right note gets my feet to going! :) ;) Thanx again for EVERYTHING and take care! ;) Yvette ;)
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ALWAYS my pleasure! xo
