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The Fantasy of Books

2-4-2 contest entry

8 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-4-2, The Fantasy of Books, has the proper formatting and encourages children (and all of us) to expand the possibilities of life through the imagination.

 Comment Written 08-May-2019


reply by the author on 08-May-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review, Bill. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi dragonskulls , congratulations on your catchy 2-4-2 certainly true even for adults Reading creates all imagination Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 07-May-2019


reply by the author on 07-May-2019
    Thank you for the great review, Christine. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from trimple
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Hello there, Ron

I read this and knew it was you.

Cracking little poem that got my vote.

kind regards

tracey

 Comment Written 06-May-2019


reply by the author on 06-May-2019
    Hey, Tracey, hello. You could tell it was me? I was trying to disguise myself because I rarely take the angle of kids reading books for a contest entry, lol. Thank you so much for the great review and support, Tracey. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great day.
reply by trimple on 06-May-2019
    Sometimes we just get a feel of the reader. When I read it, I thought... Mmmm leme check Ron's profile, and there it was!

    Writer's have flavourings that can't always be masked :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
    Lol. I don't know what's going on with the site. I've tried to look up your profile page numerous times and each time I do it's like there's too much going on and sometimes the site's thinking and sometimes it doesn't even let the circle thing in the middle even move for the site to think. Every time, whether it thinks or not, it will always freeze my computer up. I just tried it again and the same thing happened. Just filling you in.
    I don't know, it's sort of like Dean's profile page. But on his page there's just simply too much stuff going on, so I'm not sure why it happens when I go to yours.
reply by trimple on 06-May-2019
    I know from past experience that you review me on occasion. I guess that's why I don't see them anymore...

    Contacted Tom?
Comment from zanya
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Yes let's try and ensure that our children never forget to read and explore our world with all that imagination can offer -there is simply no subsitute - well done

 Comment Written 04-May-2019


reply by the author on 06-May-2019
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Zanya. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from LyndaS
Exceptional
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Now this is how you get your money's worth out of 8 syllables. Right here you have compacted an English teacher's sermon into six words. This is wonderful! The art you have chosen goes perfectly with this excellent poem. Very well done. "Read, child.." Just so cool!! Good Luck. Lynda

 Comment Written 04-May-2019


reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Lynda. Yes, the minds of our children need not be filled with TV or mindless video games. Toss them a book and let their minds travel to endless oceans of wonder. That's what I always say. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. I always try to pack as much meaning and depth into the allotted syllable count of these prompts, where every word holds its value in gold. Thank you again, Lynda. You've made my night. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.
reply by LyndaS on 05-May-2019
    Any time, hoser.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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Excellent 2-5-2 entry. You should do well in the contest. So much said in so few words. It is very good
for children to read and dream. Dreaming takes them to places they will never see while awake. Very good.

 Comment Written 04-May-2019


reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Thank you for the great review, Willie. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from F. Wehr3
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I wasn't really thinking of a child's poem here, mystery writer. Probably because of the photo and the fact the Game of Thrones series is so popular these days, but it make me want to read about dragons. Good luck in the contest.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 04-May-2019


reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Thank you for the great review, Russell. Yeah, I guess I could have picked a more cartoony, child like picture. I really just used it because I liked it. Lol. Have a great night.
Comment from victor 66
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If a child reads, most certainly I will ride on dragons and experience many other adventures Before them. Reading is one of the few lifetime hobbies that gives pleasure right to the very end. Good poem and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-May-2019


reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Thank you, Victor. I'm glad you liked this short piece.