What's Yours is not Always Mine
In marriage, you share ALMOST everything...50 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Absolutely brilliantly creative and completely original ... as I read my eyes began to mist, and finally, felt a happy tear roll down my rugged cheek.
Such is the power of a master poetess' skill.
Yvonne,
It is obvious why this piece won.
I thank you most warmly and sincerely for opening your heart through your pen! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Absolutely brilliantly creative and completely original ... as I read my eyes began to mist, and finally, felt a happy tear roll down my rugged cheek.
Such is the power of a master poetess' skill.
Yvonne,
It is obvious why this piece won.
I thank you most warmly and sincerely for opening your heart through your pen! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments here, Sir Richard -- this win was a surprise to me, so it's so good to hear that you enjoyed it so much.... oh, but I wouldn't wish a tear on your cheek! :) :) So glad it warmed your heart, though -- makes me smile! ;) Thank you for those lovely stars and the accolades they represent -- you have over-whelmed me today!! :) Take care over there, Sir! :) Yvette
Comment from mkell
It is a sad truth how much is missed when we lose something that is dear to us. What you wrote is short and sweet. Very nice picture and perfect fit with what you wrote.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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It is a sad truth how much is missed when we lose something that is dear to us. What you wrote is short and sweet. Very nice picture and perfect fit with what you wrote.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review on this one -- I'm so very glad you enjoyed Marianne and Bob -- they are certainly one of those couples that an author can almost feel as they write about them! I actually got the idea when two of my students (different grades/different classes) showed up with the same new glasses -- funny the different avenues down which an author's mind travels given certain stimulus, yeah? ;) ;)
**My apologies for being so tardy in my reply! I actually managed to post but not much of anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking some time with tea this morning before ?life? takes over again) and the weekend of ?moving sons? is not finished ? all my grades are in, though - hooray!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great Sunday! ;) Yvette
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you take good care as well
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on winning the Flash Fiction Contest with this resonating post. The story is one that my husband and I could experience! I enjoyed the truly happy ending. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Congratulations on winning the Flash Fiction Contest with this resonating post. The story is one that my husband and I could experience! I enjoyed the truly happy ending. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful 'congrats', Joan -- and I'm so very glad you enjoyed Marianne and Bob -- they are certainly one of those couples that an author can almost feel as they write about them! I actually got the idea when two of my students (different grades/different classes) showed up with the same new glasses -- funny the different avenues down which an author's mind travels given certain stimulus, yeah? ;) ;)
**My apologies for being so tardy in my reply! I actually managed to post but not much of anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking some time with tea this morning before ?life? takes over again) and the weekend of ?moving sons? is not finished ? all my grades are in, though - hooray!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great Sunday! ;) Yvette
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It sounds like you conquered your busy schedule. Thank you for finding the time to post what's been on your mind. Have a happy, special Sunday- Joan
Comment from beizanten
At first sad than lighthearted and happy, for such a short story you manage to potray three emotion very well. This story is great and full of emotion. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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At first sad than lighthearted and happy, for such a short story you manage to potray three emotion very well. This story is great and full of emotion. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for stopping in on this one, beizanten -- always so good to hear from you! :) Both Marianne and Bob send their thanx along as well! ;) :)
**My apologies for being so tardy in my reply! I actually managed to post but not much of anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking some time with tea this morning before ?life? takes over again) and the weekend of ?moving sons? is not finished ? all my grades are in, though - hooray!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great Sunday! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shenetta
I love how clear and succinct your storytelling is. You use so many elements, yet your words are clean and intriguing. Also, the photo goes very well with the poem. I would love to hear about your technique to improve my own writing. Thank you!
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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I love how clear and succinct your storytelling is. You use so many elements, yet your words are clean and intriguing. Also, the photo goes very well with the poem. I would love to hear about your technique to improve my own writing. Thank you!
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful review, Shenetta -- so glad you could drop in on Marianne and Bob! :) ;) So, far as technique, Beautiful Lady, I know not what to tell you....I am not formally trained as a writer and I simply write what is in my heart and head at the time....know that's no help, but I do thank you for your compliments!! :) ;) **My apologies for being so tardy in my reply! I actually managed to post but not much of anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking some time with tea this morning before ?life? takes over again) and the weekend of ?moving sons? is not finished ? all my grades are in, though - hooray!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great Sunday! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rmocruz
Congratulations on your 1st prize contest win.
I felt compelled to check it out; I'm pleased I did.
You have written a heartfelt, pleasant story in
this brief format; a perfect photo-art as well.
Great job, I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Congratulations on your 1st prize contest win.
I felt compelled to check it out; I'm pleased I did.
You have written a heartfelt, pleasant story in
this brief format; a perfect photo-art as well.
Great job, I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Hey!! So good to hear from you, RM, and thanx for the review on Marianne and Bob! ;) :) I actually got this idea when two of my students (different grades/different classes) showed up with the same new glasses -- funny the different avenues down which an author's mind travels given certain stimulus, yeah? ;) ;) Thanx for stopping by and thank you, again, for the wonderful review! :) :) Yvette
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Observation motivates inspiration.
You're welcome Y.M., my pleasure.
Comment from dragonpoet
This short story shows a truth of growing old. One's sight does get worse as you age. This is a funny story with a happy ending. Congrats on placing first in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This short story shows a truth of growing old. One's sight does get worse as you age. This is a funny story with a happy ending. Congrats on placing first in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanx so much for the 'congrats', Joan -- always so good to hear from you, ma'am!! ;) ;) Hope you have a wonderful weekend! ;) ;) Yvette
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No problem, Yvette. Enjoy yours. Happy Mother's Day
Joan
Comment from john mallahan
Thank you! So refreshing to look at life from different angles. Do know that am getting perilously close to what you describe, even tho am spouseless. Still got my folks
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you! So refreshing to look at life from different angles. Do know that am getting perilously close to what you describe, even tho am spouseless. Still got my folks
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanx so much for your lovely comments and wonderful review, John!! :) ;) And I'm so very glad you enjoyed Marianne and Bob -- they are certainly one of those couples that an author can almost feel as they write about them! I actually got the idea when two of my students (different grades/different classes) showed up with the same new glasses -- funny the different avenues down which an author's mind travels given certain stimulus, yeah? ;) ;) You take care out there and stop by any time! :) :) Yvette
Comment from moongirlwriter
So precious. . .the golden years that are not so golden. This couple is a rarity just because you can tell, they've been married a very long time and they laugh about silly things that don't even matter. Love that this piece received first place, congrats on this win! :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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So precious. . .the golden years that are not so golden. This couple is a rarity just because you can tell, they've been married a very long time and they laugh about silly things that don't even matter. Love that this piece received first place, congrats on this win! :)
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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What a lovely surprise your stars were for the morning, Moongirl!! :) ;) And I'm so very glad you enjoyed Marianne and Bob -- they are certainly one of those couples that an author can almost feel as they write about them! I actually got the idea when two of my students (different grades/different classes) showed up with the same new glasses -- funny the different avenues down which an author's mind travels given certain stimulus, yeah? ;) ;) Thanx for stopping by and thank you, again, for the wonderful review! :) :) Yvette
Comment from pome lover
well, congratulations, Madame!
that is so cute and a great picture to go with it!
wow - all time best, 1st prize AND recognized!
can't get any better than that!! good for you!
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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well, congratulations, Madame!
that is so cute and a great picture to go with it!
wow - all time best, 1st prize AND recognized!
can't get any better than that!! good for you!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Oh, thank you so very much, Katharine!! :) ;) You have made me smile with your wonderfully cheerful note -- thank you, THANK YOU!! :) ;) Thanx so very much for dropping in on this one, Lady Sal -- I am always so appreciative of your support! :) :) **My apologies -- behind again! I actually managed to post but not anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking a break from grading this morning) and the weekend of ?moving sons? is gonna be BUSY!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great weekend yourself! ;) Yvette
