Wisdom and Knowledge
The stages in life.6 total reviews
Comment from lucky linda
very insightful. Your descriptions are strong and give clear picutres of what you mean. Thank you for sharing this journey of the man and the child.
"Behind these bristled hairs lies the face of who you'll be."
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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very insightful. Your descriptions are strong and give clear picutres of what you mean. Thank you for sharing this journey of the man and the child.
"Behind these bristled hairs lies the face of who you'll be."
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you Linda. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
A very complex but understandable write. I had to read it twice to get the full effect and meaning. You must be a very deep thinker. It places a thought of time in the mind of the reader. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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A very complex but understandable write. I had to read it twice to get the full effect and meaning. You must be a very deep thinker. It places a thought of time in the mind of the reader. Well done.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you Willie. I need to rhyme next time.
Comment from moongirlwriter
Beautiful and profound writing about the circle of life. If we all only had the wisdom of the old when we are young. Or maybe the wisdom of listening to the older self, some lessons or heartache could be avoided. But then, those lessons are what make us all who we are on our own journey of life.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Beautiful and profound writing about the circle of life. If we all only had the wisdom of the old when we are young. Or maybe the wisdom of listening to the older self, some lessons or heartache could be avoided. But then, those lessons are what make us all who we are on our own journey of life.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you. Yes we all have to learn by our mistakes.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This story poem, Wisdom and Knowledge, shows us what we all learn, sometimes too late. It seems we can never take free advice from elders until we get burned enough to see they were right. Here's hoping we get burned enough early to learn something.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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This story poem, Wisdom and Knowledge, shows us what we all learn, sometimes too late. It seems we can never take free advice from elders until we get burned enough to see they were right. Here's hoping we get burned enough early to learn something.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you Bill. Not to burned or we're toast. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The old man ultimately finds and recognizes the stand and state of treasure of wisdom and knowledge in the young; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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The old man ultimately finds and recognizes the stand and state of treasure of wisdom and knowledge in the young; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you Al.
Comment from Coco Jane
A neat look at the passage of time. I especially like "flowers bloom on rosy cheeks."
Consider using a semicolon after "desired" to make a bigger break.
Good ending.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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A neat look at the passage of time. I especially like "flowers bloom on rosy cheeks."
Consider using a semicolon after "desired" to make a bigger break.
Good ending.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you Coco Jane.