Climbing to the Sky
one little boy's dream to be an astronaut15 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
It is an interesting first stanza and the picture suit the poetry. A very good second and third stanza especially the latter. Overall a well written poetry keep up the great work
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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It is an interesting first stanza and the picture suit the poetry. A very good second and third stanza especially the latter. Overall a well written poetry keep up the great work
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your feedback.
Connie
Comment from JanPerry
A lovely simple telling of siblings sharing their dreams. Jack became an astronaut. The last line is too long, needs to chop a word out to keep the meter intact. ABCB rhyming is suited to your story.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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A lovely simple telling of siblings sharing their dreams. Jack became an astronaut. The last line is too long, needs to chop a word out to keep the meter intact. ABCB rhyming is suited to your story.
Thanks.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh wonderful!
He believed in his dream so
much, that he made it happen.
And through it all, his sister
believed in him.
Lovely story in a poem entry!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Oh wonderful!
He believed in his dream so
much, that he made it happen.
And through it all, his sister
believed in him.
Lovely story in a poem entry!
Blessings...
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely review.
Connie
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You're welcome!
Comment from RodG
This poem will appeal to young readers with big dreams. Jack dreamt of going into space and eventually he did. The poem also tells us how important allies are, like little sisters who keep the faith with us. Rod
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reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This poem will appeal to young readers with big dreams. Jack dreamt of going into space and eventually he did. The poem also tells us how important allies are, like little sisters who keep the faith with us. Rod
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Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Rod, for your review.
Connie
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fantastic! I like the story, simple taletelling how the boy dreamt to be an astronaut became; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
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Fantastic! I like the story, simple taletelling how the boy dreamt to be an astronaut became; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
