Faerie Dust
TRIBUS OCTO ... A Children's Story Poem13 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
A very ambitious poem, following the discipline of the prompt. I enjoyed the artwork more than I actually did the poem. I fear there is just too much rhyming for me in this one. . .but it is sweet and well-written. Just not my cup of tea. I am nonetheless, impressed. :))
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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A very ambitious poem, following the discipline of the prompt. I enjoyed the artwork more than I actually did the poem. I fear there is just too much rhyming for me in this one. . .but it is sweet and well-written. Just not my cup of tea. I am nonetheless, impressed. :))
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. ( I apologize for late reply)
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:)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a delightful poetic offering! I am not familiar with "Tribus Octa," but I found it thoroughly appealing. Read aloud, your words are lilting and rhythmic. Children would, indeed, love to hear this creative story. I always knew those fairies were up to something...at least in my gardens!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a delightful poetic offering! I am not familiar with "Tribus Octa," but I found it thoroughly appealing. Read aloud, your words are lilting and rhythmic. Children would, indeed, love to hear this creative story. I always knew those fairies were up to something...at least in my gardens!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Those little fairies are always up to something!! Thank you so much for reading and little such a kind review! I do appreciate it.
Comment from fm wright
A wonderful and whimsical story poem. I like the rhyming scheme as well as the artwork you have chosen. In so much to say I have nothing to criticize about this piece and I wish you all the best with this entry!
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reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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A wonderful and whimsical story poem. I like the rhyming scheme as well as the artwork you have chosen. In so much to say I have nothing to criticize about this piece and I wish you all the best with this entry!
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Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you kindly for this lovely review! I do appreciate the kind words :-)
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You are most certainly welcome!
