Birth of a Promise
A 2-4-2 Contest Offering13 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, are rainbows really born when clouds collide? I thought that was thunder, and rainbows were reflected light on water droplets... (Don't mind me; I really don't know the facts, teach. *grin*) Your notes! :))
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
Oh, are rainbows really born when clouds collide? I thought that was thunder, and rainbows were reflected light on water droplets... (Don't mind me; I really don't know the facts, teach. *grin*) Your notes! :))
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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You so funny.... you could be one of my 'brilliant' students (LOL!) :) ;) Thanx for the review, ma'am -- you and Miss Priss enjoy the weekend and next week -- I'm gonna try not to get too far behind again..... but I know that's something that's just not possible at this point! :) ;) Yvette
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I try, I really try. *smirk*
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking piece on results. Sometimes success is the result of conflicts
resolved over time.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking piece on results. Sometimes success is the result of conflicts
resolved over time.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very beautiful verse with a great photo too. I like your way of using the word.. collide.. its like they bump and poof you have a rainbow. Very fanciful.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
This is a very beautiful verse with a great photo too. I like your way of using the word.. collide.. its like they bump and poof you have a rainbow. Very fanciful.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Melissa. ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the rainbow that is a promise to man and God will keep His promise. The science of the rainbow is true as well.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the rainbow that is a promise to man and God will keep His promise. The science of the rainbow is true as well.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Sandra. ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Bring on the clouds!
Bring on the rainbows!
Bring on more of your delightful poetry that makes the reader pause and reflect!
Thank you!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
Hello Mystery Writer,
Bring on the clouds!
Bring on the rainbows!
Bring on more of your delightful poetry that makes the reader pause and reflect!
Thank you!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Diane. ;)
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent concept and synchrony between the picture and your writing. Thanks for sharing some scientific information to broaden my information about rainbows also.
Bill
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
Excellent concept and synchrony between the picture and your writing. Thanks for sharing some scientific information to broaden my information about rainbows also.
Bill
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bill. ;)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
So very beautiful. Love the artwork, love your author notes (you educated me), love your color scheme, font and the message conveyed. A most wonderful contest entry!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
So very beautiful. Love the artwork, love your author notes (you educated me), love your color scheme, font and the message conveyed. A most wonderful contest entry!
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting poetic portrayal of rainbows and their origins - rainbows never cease to inspire and fascinate us - superb pic to illustrate their beauty
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
Yes an interesting poetic portrayal of rainbows and their origins - rainbows never cease to inspire and fascinate us - superb pic to illustrate their beauty
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I liked this informative 2-4-2 poem about formation and transformational state of rainbows in the sky; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
I liked this informative 2-4-2 poem about formation and transformational state of rainbows in the sky; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes and usually a storm has occurred beforehand so that the rainbow peeps through the clouds, I enjoyed your 2-4-2 and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
Yes and usually a storm has occurred beforehand so that the rainbow peeps through the clouds, I enjoyed your 2-4-2 and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)