Birth of a Promise
A 2-4-2 Contest Offering13 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
O love the intense simplicity and meaning of this. Clouds collide...signifying conflict. Rainbows, signifying forgiveness and acceptance. Brilliant wisdom, portrayed with deft dexterity and word economy. A six, even with cliche rainbow imagery--because you made it fresh and memorable! Bravo! Also, bravo on the effective alliteration. The science of it is also interesting, but it is the metaphorical magic that nudges a rare six from me (I hardly ever give sixes to three liners).
Bravo and good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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O love the intense simplicity and meaning of this. Clouds collide...signifying conflict. Rainbows, signifying forgiveness and acceptance. Brilliant wisdom, portrayed with deft dexterity and word economy. A six, even with cliche rainbow imagery--because you made it fresh and memorable! Bravo! Also, bravo on the effective alliteration. The science of it is also interesting, but it is the metaphorical magic that nudges a rare six from me (I hardly ever give sixes to three liners).
Bravo and good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and those lovely stars, rd!! ;) You have truly put a smile on my face when I would not have expected (long week - ugh!) ;) Take care! ;)
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:-)))
Comment from Miriam Collins
I love this! Absolutely beautiful! I love the word collide, it makes me imagine the beauty of rainbows in a new way! I love that it is an unexpected way of thinking about rainbows!
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reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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I love this! Absolutely beautiful! I love the word collide, it makes me imagine the beauty of rainbows in a new way! I love that it is an unexpected way of thinking about rainbows!
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Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and enthusiastic review, Kelsey -- have a great evening! :) ;)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I really liked the education this one provided via your poem and the author's notes. The picture definitely made a full presentation with the piece. Good job.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This was a good read. I really liked the education this one provided via your poem and the author's notes. The picture definitely made a full presentation with the piece. Good job.
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Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
