Friends
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Comment from Heather Knight
I don't know if this is fact or fiction, but you make it sound real. I love your description and also the beautiful artwork.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
I don't know if this is fact or fiction, but you make it sound real. I love your description and also the beautiful artwork.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you for being so kind. I'm glad you liked my poem, and I did win!!! There were so many excellent entries, I loved them all. Thanks again. :)
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Congratulations!
Comment from misscookie
I found this to and lovely read how to can become one
the love, trust is totally there why cant we learn from your poem
it touched my heart and soul from the start
this is what I call a food for though poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
I found this to and lovely read how to can become one
the love, trust is totally there why cant we learn from your poem
it touched my heart and soul from the start
this is what I call a food for though poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem, and for such nice comments. I really appreciate it.
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It was my pleasure
Cookie
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My pleasure
Cookie
Comment from phil nelson
This was a most enjoyable poem. Although I don't ride myself, my four daughters do, and so I can see the connections that you make in your poem between the rider and horse. You have captured the spirit and the bonding so well in your writing. Well done!
All the Best!
phil
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
This was a most enjoyable poem. Although I don't ride myself, my four daughters do, and so I can see the connections that you make in your poem between the rider and horse. You have captured the spirit and the bonding so well in your writing. Well done!
All the Best!
phil
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem, and for such a nice review. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the friendship bond between horse and rider that is always unique how they understand each other without speaking many words.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
A very well-written poem about the friendship bond between horse and rider that is always unique how they understand each other without speaking many words.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem, and for understanding what it was about. :)
Comment from LisaMay
This is a beautiful poem speaking eloquently of the close bond that is so uplifting. In reading it we feel uplifted also, vicariously enjoying the run in the sea with the weather about to break.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
This is a beautiful poem speaking eloquently of the close bond that is so uplifting. In reading it we feel uplifted also, vicariously enjoying the run in the sea with the weather about to break.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you this nice review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from WryWriter
This is excellent! The theme horse. Great rhyming in these stanzas. Perfect artwork choice for this poem. The sentences flow beautifully. Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
This is excellent! The theme horse. Great rhyming in these stanzas. Perfect artwork choice for this poem. The sentences flow beautifully. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem. I really appreciate it, and I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Loving horses and having owned horses, I think this is a beautiful poem describing the bond between horse and owner. I love the vivid picture you painted of the adventure, and your exquisite use of action verbs.
This is a great contest entry!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
Loving horses and having owned horses, I think this is a beautiful poem describing the bond between horse and owner. I love the vivid picture you painted of the adventure, and your exquisite use of action verbs.
This is a great contest entry!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for this great review, It means a lot to me. :)
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It is truly a BEAUTIFUL poem :)
Comment from JudyE
I had horses most of my life and certainly strong bonds are created between horse and rider.
I did pick up one glitch: The last line doesn't seem quite right. I'm not sure what you meant to say here.
as long as fate and time allow, we friend's to ride together.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
I had horses most of my life and certainly strong bonds are created between horse and rider.
I did pick up one glitch: The last line doesn't seem quite right. I'm not sure what you meant to say here.
as long as fate and time allow, we friend's to ride together.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for this great review and the excellent advice. I changed that line and like it much better. Thanks again.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing your writing about horses. Great job for this entry in the contest. Seems like you enjoy riding yourself or have in the past.
Bill
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
Thanks for sharing your writing about horses. Great job for this entry in the contest. Seems like you enjoy riding yourself or have in the past.
Bill
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from L. A. Stanley
This is beautifully written, uses great descriptive words, and flows well. You get a "feeling" from reading this poem. I can tell you are really a horse owner and horse lover. Well done! Good luck to you with the contest!
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
This is beautifully written, uses great descriptive words, and flows well. You get a "feeling" from reading this poem. I can tell you are really a horse owner and horse lover. Well done! Good luck to you with the contest!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I appreciate you taking time to read and review my poem. :)