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Necessary Ingredient

Without it there would be no life on earth

6 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-4-2, Necessary Ingredient, has the right set up and praises the watery downfall as it brings life and washes the car a bit.

 Comment Written 08-May-2019

reply by the author on 08-May-2019
    Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Plants, as they provide necessary ingredients, and watery gems and rain drops help us many ways to give us life or survive; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-May-2019

reply by the author on 01-May-2019
    Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from humpwhistle
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I certainly can't argue with your premise. Water is the essence for all life--as we know it. From a writers standpoint, I wonder if there might be a stronger verb than 'Gives' for your opening. Gives strikes me as passive. 'Sparks' maybe? You see where I'm going.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 01-May-2019

reply by the author on 01-May-2019
    I thought about yields but I like sparks better Thanks for the suggestion. Appreciated your read and review.
Comment from Earl Corp
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The picture you chose to accompany your poem is awesome. Your poem makes a lot of sense, everything on earth needs water to survive and flourish.

 Comment Written 01-May-2019

reply by the author on 01-May-2019
    Thank you for your read and comments.
Comment from Beri Bee
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You've written a beautiful 2-4-2! I love the expression comparing raindrops to gems! They are very precious indeed, and life-giving! Even better! Well done!

 Comment Written 01-May-2019

reply by the author on 01-May-2019
    Thanks for you read and comments. I see by your name you are a nature lover.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Few words here but lots of growth, rain and promise for life and I liked your uplifting and spring-like write, best wishes for the contest . . . . . love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-May-2019

reply by the author on 01-May-2019
    Changed gives to sparks thought it has a more active feel. Thanks for you read and comments.