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NaPoWriMo 2019

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National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Hi Alicia,

So very true! What would we do without our friends?! They really are a "blessing".

Your poem speaks volumes. "Listen and talk, laugh, cry, enjoy" ... that sums it up so well. And isn't it nice that friends accept "the real you". :) We can be ourselves around them.

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 05-May-2019


reply by the author on 06-May-2019
    Hi Connie! You're such a nice friend. I wrote it for you. The form was so constricting 8-4-4-4 repeat repeat. I'd like to pull a Poe and use the same words repeated ridiculously, but it's phenomonal. I'm not ready yet. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
reply by bichonfrisegirl on 06-May-2019
    What a sweet thing to say! :) Yes, the 4 syllable parts are very constricting. They seem so simple, but they're not.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written minute poem about friendships that is more giving than receiving. We accept one another with all their flaws and see enjoy their uniqueness.

 Comment Written 01-May-2019


reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    Hi Sandra! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you, my friend, for sharing your reflections about friendships. I enjoyed your unrhymed quatrains in this Minute Poem and the lovely artwork. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Beri Bee
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What is this friendship thing you write of? Just kidding! This poem is about the most ideal elements of a relationship and it's beautiful too! It's, as I like to call it, the way it should be! Congrats again! Well done!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
reply by Beri Bee on 02-May-2019
    Thanks, Alicia! (I needed them!)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Alicia. Friendship is most important and carries us through good and not-so-good times. The pink rose displayed in in your Minute poem in friendship is extra nice. Marilyn

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    Hi Marilyn! You're the best. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Alicia, my father always told us to love and respect family and friends...they would be there for you till the end...love your poem...and love your stunning picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from Sally Law
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I can tell you do love your friends. Make sure they all see this sweet tribute. Love expressed and demonstrated will give you an even larger circle. Well done!
All my best,
Sally :+)

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
reply by Sally Law on 30-Apr-2019
    You are very welcome,e. Have a good night!
Comment from royowen
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Good friends are hard to come by. When it's all boiled down one doesn't have many actual friends. Someone once said if you have one actual friend...you were rich, Beautifully written dear Alicia, congrats on your completing the April challenge, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
reply by royowen on 30-Apr-2019
    Bless you
Comment from Tina Crute
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You list all the reasons friends are valuable, but in a pretty poetic way. It is simple and straightforward and meaningful, so good job on a great minute poem.

Blessings!
Tina

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
reply by Tina Crute on 30-Apr-2019
    You are welcome!:)
    Tina
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Value, essence, need, service and contribution of friendships are highlighted, truly, friendships add value to life; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)