My Guardian
2 Stanza Poem Contest Entry17 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
This is an intelligent and amazing poem, that I had to read twice to be satisfied that I got the whole wonderful story. It is so well done and creative; each line is packed with purpose. With a happy ending, pictured in the artwork, it is a complete masterpiece. I love this, simply stated.
Blessings,
Tina
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This is an intelligent and amazing poem, that I had to read twice to be satisfied that I got the whole wonderful story. It is so well done and creative; each line is packed with purpose. With a happy ending, pictured in the artwork, it is a complete masterpiece. I love this, simply stated.
Blessings,
Tina
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the kind review and the big sixer, Tina. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you liked my short little tale. Have a wonderful night. Thank you again.
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You are welcome:)
I enjoyed it and had to 'six' it!
Tina
Comment from Raul1
This sounds like the dragons from Game of Thrones. I like how you structured this poem. I can understand it because it's easy to read. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This sounds like the dragons from Game of Thrones. I like how you structured this poem. I can understand it because it's easy to read. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Raul. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
I enjoyed your entry for the writing prompt.
A refreshing theme - perfectly even meter and sound rhyme scheme made for a smooth and entertaining read. Well presented also.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi :)
I enjoyed your entry for the writing prompt.
A refreshing theme - perfectly even meter and sound rhyme scheme made for a smooth and entertaining read. Well presented also.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Debra. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you like my little tale. Have a great night.
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You're welcome :) Congratulations on winning the contest! You got my vote... your entry stood out for all the right reasons ;)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very creative. Your piece has a great rhythm to and also a very kind of bouncy rhyme scheme which gives your fantastical piece a kind of musical quality to it. Well done , loved the heroine you created that was willing to risk her life for the sake of a dragon that had been unfairly abused. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Very creative. Your piece has a great rhythm to and also a very kind of bouncy rhyme scheme which gives your fantastical piece a kind of musical quality to it. Well done , loved the heroine you created that was willing to risk her life for the sake of a dragon that had been unfairly abused. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Justin. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're welcome.
Comment from RodG
I don't usually read fantasy fiction, but I like thispoem.. you have packed considerable narrative into eight lines. You have an interesting protagonist, brave and resourceful. Has he appeared in other posts? Rod
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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I don't usually read fantasy fiction, but I like thispoem.. you have packed considerable narrative into eight lines. You have an interesting protagonist, brave and resourceful. Has he appeared in other posts? Rod
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Rod. I'm glad you liked the piece. Yes, he has been here and there, lol. Have a great night.
Comment from poetwatch
The elf a mighty warrior crusaded for the rights of the defenseless just because they are different. I like your style. May there always be someone to defend the humble. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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The elf a mighty warrior crusaded for the rights of the defenseless just because they are different. I like your style. May there always be someone to defend the humble. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Poet. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from oliver818
Great poem, I really enjoyed it. It flows well and is easy to read. The imagery is vivid and powerful and brings the piece to life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Great poem, I really enjoyed it. It flows well and is easy to read. The imagery is vivid and powerful and brings the piece to life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Oliver. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day as well.
