Please, Don't Buy Into the Lies!
A 5-7-5 Contest Offering16 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, haha I like it. It's definitely a truth but not one young people can easily grasp. Thanks for sharing this poem and best of luck with the competition. Have a great day
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Nice poem, haha I like it. It's definitely a truth but not one young people can easily grasp. Thanks for sharing this poem and best of luck with the competition. Have a great day
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Too easy to get an Amen with this one. You have homed in on another one to scare the kids with. Concise warning on a relateable concept for us oldies who have been coping with the 'joys' of adulthood for a while..
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Too easy to get an Amen with this one. You have homed in on another one to scare the kids with. Concise warning on a relateable concept for us oldies who have been coping with the 'joys' of adulthood for a while..
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he this made me smile, so true and why is it that everyday we are a child seems like a lifetime and when we reach adulthood the clock ticks faster? I could never figure that one out, a fine 5-7-5, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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He he he this made me smile, so true and why is it that everyday we are a child seems like a lifetime and when we reach adulthood the clock ticks faster? I could never figure that one out, a fine 5-7-5, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made great use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking 5-7-5. Some kids just can't WAIT to be grown--tired of parent's rules, schoolwork, etc. Later they look back with regret.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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You have made great use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking 5-7-5. Some kids just can't WAIT to be grown--tired of parent's rules, schoolwork, etc. Later they look back with regret.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
You get an applause from me for this post because our youth need to ponder their future.
great illustration to accompany your contest entry
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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You get an applause from me for this post because our youth need to ponder their future.
great illustration to accompany your contest entry
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Beri Bee
Yes, that's the truth! I love your sense of humor in dealing with this harsh reality of life! Best of luck with the contest! You chose a great photo to go with your poem!
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Yes, that's the truth! I love your sense of humor in dealing with this harsh reality of life! Best of luck with the contest! You chose a great photo to go with your poem!
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
