Please, Don't Buy Into the Lies!
A 5-7-5 Contest Offering16 total reviews
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
Hahahaha - too true! So is the phrase, "Golden Age" false advertising. But will anyone listen before they get to that age? Nnnn-oooo. *grin* You've got a big "amen" from me. :)))
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Hahahaha - too true! So is the phrase, "Golden Age" false advertising. But will anyone listen before they get to that age? Nnnn-oooo. *grin* You've got a big "amen" from me. :)))
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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LOL! :) ;) and Hooray! ;) ;) My students just look at me like I'm from another planet... hey! Maybe they're right! ;) LOL! Thanx for stopping in, Lady Dawn! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Debra White
Hi Yvette :)
I completely agree...if only I'd listened to my Grandad when he said 'don't grow up, Debra, it's not all it's cracked up to be!'
Great entry for the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Hi Yvette :)
I completely agree...if only I'd listened to my Grandad when he said 'don't grow up, Debra, it's not all it's cracked up to be!'
Great entry for the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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LOL! :) ;) You and me both... can we just go back or maybe just 'take it from here' with the 'right' attitude?!! LOL! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in on this one, Debra -- so sorry I'm running behind life's crazy and fate threw a wrench into the works this week.....June will be here and there's always caramel and ice cream for stress relief, right?!! :) You take care out there! Yvette
Comment from Liberty Justice
Great use of metaphor and very good warning for young people about struggles of adulthood and they certainly don't want to rush into it. Read Review mine also.liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Great use of metaphor and very good warning for young people about struggles of adulthood and they certainly don't want to rush into it. Read Review mine also.liberty justice
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review on this one, Liberty -- much appreciated, ma'am!! ;);)
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Read Review mine, also. lolol liberty justice LOTS OF storms in Texas.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a warning to young ones that they must be aware of the false advertisement of the joy of adulthood, that is when the worries and troubles start.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a warning to young ones that they must be aware of the false advertisement of the joy of adulthood, that is when the worries and troubles start.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review on this one, Sandra -- much appreciated, ma'am!! ;);)
Comment from l.raven
boy you aren't kidding...what the government doesn't take from us...age takes away the rest...very well written...perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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boy you aren't kidding...what the government doesn't take from us...age takes away the rest...very well written...perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
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you are so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! Lol. Love your humor! Thanks for the chuckles. But then again, perhaps we need to have the young folks believe in the joys of responsibility so that we older folks can have some peace of mind.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Amen! Lol. Love your humor! Thanks for the chuckles. But then again, perhaps we need to have the young folks believe in the joys of responsibility so that we older folks can have some peace of mind.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Please Don't Buy Into the Lies!, has the right set up and notes a dissatisfied member cautioning newcomers to the hardships of accountability and expectation.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This 5-7-5, Please Don't Buy Into the Lies!, has the right set up and notes a dissatisfied member cautioning newcomers to the hardships of accountability and expectation.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Nope. No 'Amen' here! I like not having to ask permission to eat cookies or take the car wherever I choose. Sure, there's trade-offs (bills, deadlines, responsibilities), but in my assessment, I'm way ahead as a grown-up. Still, I love this 5-7-5 and hope you do well in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Nope. No 'Amen' here! I like not having to ask permission to eat cookies or take the car wherever I choose. Sure, there's trade-offs (bills, deadlines, responsibilities), but in my assessment, I'm way ahead as a grown-up. Still, I love this 5-7-5 and hope you do well in the contest. xo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I really like how you brought together the photo (scam alert) and poem to express a message.
I remember I couldn't wait to grow up, and now I sometimes think about what it would be like to be a kid again without the worries and responsibilities of adulthood (LOL).
A great contest entry!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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I really like how you brought together the photo (scam alert) and poem to express a message.
I remember I couldn't wait to grow up, and now I sometimes think about what it would be like to be a kid again without the worries and responsibilities of adulthood (LOL).
A great contest entry!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from JudyE
This is clever and so true in so many ways. The young can't wait to grow up and the old would given almost anything to be young again. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This is clever and so true in so many ways. The young can't wait to grow up and the old would given almost anything to be young again. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)