Rainbow Rain
a 5-7-5 Contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a very wise little granddaughter to figure out the rainbow only appears after the rain. So wait for the rain, get the umbrella and search for the rainbow.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a very wise little granddaughter to figure out the rainbow only appears after the rain. So wait for the rain, get the umbrella and search for the rainbow.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for your review of my Rainbow Rain, Yes my granddaughter is quite the deep thinker and ai liked her version Cheers Christine
Comment from L. A. Stanley
I like this! You have a good choice of words to describe something you tell your granddaughter (or something your grandmother told you).
Very wise words and I love the title. Great artwork you chose!! Very colorful and it suits this poem because it makes me think these words are for a grandCHILD. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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I like this! You have a good choice of words to describe something you tell your granddaughter (or something your grandmother told you).
Very wise words and I love the title. Great artwork you chose!! Very colorful and it suits this poem because it makes me think these words are for a grandCHILD. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi LA Stanley, Thank for reading my poem for thos contest I thought her words were worth sharing and she made me think also Cheers Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Rainbow Rain, has the right set up and makes the observation that rain, the downside of weather, is a basic requirement for a rainbow of redemption.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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This 5-7-5, Rainbow Rain, has the right set up and makes the observation that rain, the downside of weather, is a basic requirement for a rainbow of redemption.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Bill, Thank so much and I think this statement my Grandaughter said has two meanings and I thought it worth sharing Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
There you go. So true. Without rain there would be no rainbows. A good reminder to take the good with the no-so-good. I like the illustration. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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There you go. So true. Without rain there would be no rainbows. A good reminder to take the good with the no-so-good. I like the illustration. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Marilyn, Thanks so much and yes I think this has a couple of meanings apart from the weather phenonemon often a good thing need a little work to become like a rainbow Cheers Christine
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is why I love children: they are so smart and notice EVERYTHING! I hope your granddaughter helps you win this contest. Please tell her, for me, that she brought nothing but sunshine to my day with these words of wisdom. xo
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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This is why I love children: they are so smart and notice EVERYTHING! I hope your granddaughter helps you win this contest. Please tell her, for me, that she brought nothing but sunshine to my day with these words of wisdom. xo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Rachelle, Thanks for reading my poem and yes children often come put with some great observations, Unfortunately no prize this time except for me my grandaughter my prize all the time Cheers Christine
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I love your positive way of thinking!! Good prioritizing!! xo
Comment from Dean Kuch
"Into every life a little rain must fall."
You can't have a rainbow unless you also have rain.
Your granddaughter sounds like a very intelligent young lass.
Now I have a quote you can share with her if you like:
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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"Into every life a little rain must fall."
You can't have a rainbow unless you also have rain.
Your granddaughter sounds like a very intelligent young lass.
Now I have a quote you can share with her if you like:
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi Dean, Thanks for your review and yes you do need a little rain at times to create the rainbow, I love your quote also a nice one to activate cheers for your best wishes no luck this time but lucky to have such a lovely grandaughter Cheers Christine
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You're very welcome, Christine.
~Dean
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Tell your granddaughter she is a genius :) This is true in life, too.
Beautifully composed; loved all the children's primary colors; perfect artwork. A delightful poem and a great contest entry.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Tell your granddaughter she is a genius :) This is true in life, too.
Beautifully composed; loved all the children's primary colors; perfect artwork. A delightful poem and a great contest entry.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Hi CGale, Thanks for your review and yes this is true I loved her logic and was happy to share this Cheers Christine
Comment from JudyE
What a wise little grand-daughter you have! And you've put it very nicely in your poem. Thanks for sharing this little bit of wisdom and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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What a wise little grand-daughter you have! And you've put it very nicely in your poem. Thanks for sharing this little bit of wisdom and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Judy, Thanks for your review and yes she isca wiseclittle girl and comes up with some good ones ai really liked her thinking on this one Cheers for your good luck
Comment from Sandra Montanino
This is a very powerful statement that should be on some plaques you can buy online or at the mall. You did a great job and your picture adds to the point you make quite well.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This is a very powerful statement that should be on some plaques you can buy online or at the mall. You did a great job and your picture adds to the point you make quite well.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra, Thanks so much and yes it does lend itself to a plaque So glad you liked this one Cheers
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed it. Kids are great for making the obvious clear to everyone. Haha. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition. Have a great day
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Nice poem, I enjoyed it. Kids are great for making the obvious clear to everyone. Haha. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition. Have a great day
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi oliver818 Thanks for your review and yes sometimes the child can makeca clear statememt I loved this one and thought it would fit this contest Cheers