Another Spring
5-7-5 contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Another Spring, has the right set up and seems to find mandatory Spring writing requirements or just chosen topics of this nature -- tiresome. Fine, but close that hole and pick up that brain.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This 5-7-5, Another Spring, has the right set up and seems to find mandatory Spring writing requirements or just chosen topics of this nature -- tiresome. Fine, but close that hole and pick up that brain.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Lol. Yeah, I guess I better had. Thank you for the great review, Bill.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
OMG!!! It's not even 9 a.m., and I already bet this is the funniest thing I will see and read the entire day!!! HYSTERICAL!!! What a great entry! I wish you the BEST luck in this contest. xo
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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OMG!!! It's not even 9 a.m., and I already bet this is the funniest thing I will see and read the entire day!!! HYSTERICAL!!! What a great entry! I wish you the BEST luck in this contest. xo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Rachelle. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness and to see you jumped on as a fan. I write a lot of dumb stuff like this, lol. Have a great night.
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Then you are the writer for me! I LOVE dumb stuff!! xo
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Your 5-7-5 contest entry has me laughing :) I hadn't had a chance to write my 'Spring write,' but maybe that it a good thing for you for I wouldn't want your brain to 'fall out' of your 'yawn hole'.
Very comical, a great contest entry and very creative. Love the photograph!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Your 5-7-5 contest entry has me laughing :) I hadn't had a chance to write my 'Spring write,' but maybe that it a good thing for you for I wouldn't want your brain to 'fall out' of your 'yawn hole'.
Very comical, a great contest entry and very creative. Love the photograph!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Gale. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great day.
Comment from LyndaS
Warning..the following review contains adult language.
No shit!!! Save me from these boring (not to mention stupid) spring posts. There's only so many things you can say about flowers, rain, bunnies, the birth of whatever crap they can think of. Spring is allergies, bug bites, mud and the IRS. Not to mention all these endless bullshit contest entries.
That being said, this is so funny and your picture here is priceless! God bless you and I'd wish you good luck in this contest but we both know this is going down in flames.
Best of luck. Lynda
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Warning..the following review contains adult language.
No shit!!! Save me from these boring (not to mention stupid) spring posts. There's only so many things you can say about flowers, rain, bunnies, the birth of whatever crap they can think of. Spring is allergies, bug bites, mud and the IRS. Not to mention all these endless bullshit contest entries.
That being said, this is so funny and your picture here is priceless! God bless you and I'd wish you good luck in this contest but we both know this is going down in flames.
Best of luck. Lynda
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lynda. I'm glad you liked this dumb piece. Have a great night.
Ron
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Yawn. Boring reply. :-)
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Yeah, It could have been better, but what can you do? Lol.
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LMAO!! Thanks I needed that.
Comment from humpwhistle
I applaud you. I've felt the same way about daffodils and chirping songbirds, but I didn't have the guts to say so. Thank you.
Incidentally, that's one impressive yawn hole.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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I applaud you. I've felt the same way about daffodils and chirping songbirds, but I didn't have the guts to say so. Thank you.
Incidentally, that's one impressive yawn hole.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Lol. Yeah, it took a little manipulating to get it to look that size. Ha. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Lee. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I couldn't resist. Lol.
Comment from Beri Bee
You've written a very relatable short poem! I'm not in total agreement with the sentiment, but I totally appreciate your humor! Well done! Best of luck with this entry into the contest! I think I see a win in your future!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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You've written a very relatable short poem! I'm not in total agreement with the sentiment, but I totally appreciate your humor! Well done! Best of luck with this entry into the contest! I think I see a win in your future!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Lol. No, I'm fairly sure I just threw five dollars away. But I had fun doing it, so that's all that matters. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Beri
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Well then, it was a gift to me! So it's much appreciated! Thanks for the fiver! (Still, I think it has a pretty good chance!)
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Finger are crossed.
;)
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"Fingers"
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Crossed indeed!