NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Spring Landscape By The Sea"National Poetry Writing Month
12 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Ooops--I almost missed this post! I could see and hear the spring scene and enjoyed your alliteration of "s's" and artwork selection to intensify the experience. Big smiles and more kudos for your dedication to NaPoWriMo- Joan
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Ooops--I almost missed this post! I could see and hear the spring scene and enjoyed your alliteration of "s's" and artwork selection to intensify the experience. Big smiles and more kudos for your dedication to NaPoWriMo- Joan
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Spring Landscape By the Sea, depicts this chosen picture and is supported by some creative choices in alliteration. Neat.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This poem, Spring Landscape By the Sea, depicts this chosen picture and is supported by some creative choices in alliteration. Neat.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from redrumdan
Beautiful imagery! The opening line is really wonderful in setting it up and breathing happiness into the reader. I'm ready for another day like this. Thank you for this poem!!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Beautiful imagery! The opening line is really wonderful in setting it up and breathing happiness into the reader. I'm ready for another day like this. Thank you for this poem!!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem is lovely, making excellent use of specific
details to create a scenario that makes the reader want to go there.
Note: should be "couple of boats."
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem is lovely, making excellent use of specific
details to create a scenario that makes the reader want to go there.
Note: should be "couple of boats."
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Janice! I appreciate the edit note. Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the picture and what we see with our eyes said in words to create an imaginary scene in the mind as well. A great form of poetry.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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A very well-written poem about the picture and what we see with our eyes said in words to create an imaginary scene in the mind as well. A great form of poetry.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
This was such a pleasant read, sunnilicious. You painted quite the serene scene. I felt relaxed just reading it. So I did it a couple of times. It takes the reader away to a happy place. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This was such a pleasant read, sunnilicious. You painted quite the serene scene. I felt relaxed just reading it. So I did it a couple of times. It takes the reader away to a happy place. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Tide rises to meet the setting sun, the landscape at the sea beach, spring memories go sweeter at the moment; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Tide rises to meet the setting sun, the landscape at the sea beach, spring memories go sweeter at the moment; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
A very nicely described landscape portraiture (pictoral) poem, Alicia. I must try one of these as I like the concept of descriptive scenes as the theme for a poem. Well done. (I hope you have a sunshine day, too.) Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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A very nicely described landscape portraiture (pictoral) poem, Alicia. I must try one of these as I like the concept of descriptive scenes as the theme for a poem. Well done. (I hope you have a sunshine day, too.) Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
Most of us are not usually blessed with having palm trees swaying overhead, (coconuts can kill, heh heh) but you paint an idyllic picture Alicia, the artwork backs it up. I have an Indonesian son in law who moved here with my daughter and we have two delightful grandchildren from them. It's a lovely tropical place, hot all year round. Beautifully written with wonderful languid imagery, well done, wahoo, today's the last day, well dine, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Most of us are not usually blessed with having palm trees swaying overhead, (coconuts can kill, heh heh) but you paint an idyllic picture Alicia, the artwork backs it up. I have an Indonesian son in law who moved here with my daughter and we have two delightful grandchildren from them. It's a lovely tropical place, hot all year round. Beautifully written with wonderful languid imagery, well done, wahoo, today's the last day, well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Roy! You have such a beautiful family. Take plenty pictures when you visit those in-laws in Indonesia. You'll have a wild time. I'm shocked you don't have coconut trees in Australia on the beaches. They're in Florida everywhere. Also, palm trees are all over Southern California. Thank you :)
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Oh no, we have plenty in the tropics Alicia, there are some in the south, in Sydney and even here, there just not native, blessings
Comment from Dutchie
Such a peaceful poem, Alicia. It sounds so well with all the s words at the end. Wonderful alliteration with the s words too.
Great impression of a seascape. Love it my dear friend. Fia
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Such a peaceful poem, Alicia. It sounds so well with all the s words at the end. Wonderful alliteration with the s words too.
Great impression of a seascape. Love it my dear friend. Fia
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Fia! You're nice. Thank you :)