Primordial Soup
It wasn't a fly5 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Oh dear, John! Sounds to me like there's a free meal in your future! If I were you I'd start ordering drinks! ;) (let the waiter know, the less you have to pay for the meal, the more you have for a tip!) lol
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Oh dear, John! Sounds to me like there's a free meal in your future! If I were you I'd start ordering drinks! ;) (let the waiter know, the less you have to pay for the meal, the more you have for a tip!) lol
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you. Please forgive me I am finally catching up on all my reviews. So sorry for my late reply. I do appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Best
John
Comment from Gail Denham
Yes, per the old saying. "Waiter- what is this fly doing in my soup?" Waiter replies "Swimming". I've heard of folks opening a can of Campbell's soup to find glass or pieces of a dead mouse. Ugh.
Good posting.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Yes, per the old saying. "Waiter- what is this fly doing in my soup?" Waiter replies "Swimming". I've heard of folks opening a can of Campbell's soup to find glass or pieces of a dead mouse. Ugh.
Good posting.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you. Please forgive me I am finally catching up on all my reviews. So sorry for my late reply. I do appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Best
John
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAHAHA!! OMG, John, your writings can make me laugh harder than anyone else's on this site, I swear!! You are so consistently hilarious. (I like your deep side, too, and think it's awesome that you can be that versatile, but your funny side is SOO my sense of humor!) Absolutely delightful write here!!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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HAHAHAHAHAHA!! OMG, John, your writings can make me laugh harder than anyone else's on this site, I swear!! You are so consistently hilarious. (I like your deep side, too, and think it's awesome that you can be that versatile, but your funny side is SOO my sense of humor!) Absolutely delightful write here!!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Well Rachelle, I am touched by your comments. Well I mean you touched my funny bone. You really should keep your musical hands to yourself. LOL
John xo
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How about if I keep them to my flute and piano? At least then they'll be productive!! xo
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Haha a flautist's work is never done. Just ask Peter and that old wolf.
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Exactly!!
Comment from tfawcus
A great addition to the Waiter! Waiter! jokes. Clever double use of 'god' as an exclamation and as a deity. I'm wondering who it is that's talking in this one, life having only just been discovered in the soup!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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A great addition to the Waiter! Waiter! jokes. Clever double use of 'god' as an exclamation and as a deity. I'm wondering who it is that's talking in this one, life having only just been discovered in the soup!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you. Please forgive me I am finally catching up on all my reviews. So sorry for my late reply. I do appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Best
John
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your poem, it's very funny. I like the word primordial, it has a great feel to it. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed your poem, it's very funny. I like the word primordial, it has a great feel to it. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you. Please forgive me I am finally catching up on all my reviews. So sorry for my late reply. I do appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Best
John
