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Wisdom calls Aloud.

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Comment from Earl Corp
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Not trying to be smart, but do you mean looks like a student when you say, "Has a student's face? Or does it mean locked eyes because the student is looking at the teacher? I totally agree in both scenarios, you should have their undivided attention. This should be a one line poem entry. It has a couple of takeaways which bot make senes, and it makes people think. Nice job.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
    HELLO EARL: Thank you for asking me that important question. Here...I mean both scenarios of what you imagined. But mainly I mean that whenever a teacher is not, "Child-Friendly," the students are going to know...at first sight. And that teacher is going to become invisible...immediately, as far as the children are concerned. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Rhonnie,
An excellent short poem that also gets our attention.
Sometimes we can learn a great deal from the young
sometimes from their innocence, sometimes because
they have a different visions.
It pays to listen to everyone.
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
    HELLO RSPOET: You are keen. You see this message exactly the way I meant for people to see it. I can tell that you are child-friendly, at heart. It gets your attention...and gives you something to think about. "YEAH!" That's the spirit my friend. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.