NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "An Old Home"National Poetry Writing Month
7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. I think you've got me hooked on pictorals now that I've read two of yours. This one does have a little bit of an ominous air to it, but I like that aspect of it--sort of mysterious. Nicely done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia. I think you've got me hooked on pictorals now that I've read two of yours. This one does have a little bit of an ominous air to it, but I like that aspect of it--sort of mysterious. Nicely done. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Marilyn! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your vivid, pictoral poem and the reinforcing picture. I relished your adding the drama with the appeal to our sense of hearing. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for sharing your vivid, pictoral poem and the reinforcing picture. I relished your adding the drama with the appeal to our sense of hearing. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Treischel
I liked the turn. The thought of the mirrored image is what carried you to Snow White's evil witch. Then the wind carried you to the bells. I liked the poem, although as a pictoral poem you could have stuck to the image more, describing the waterfalls, the cedar siding, the covered bridge, the leaf strewn grass, the wooded surroundings, and certainly the waterwheel. So, as a pictoral, I had to assign only a 4. Sorry.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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I liked the turn. The thought of the mirrored image is what carried you to Snow White's evil witch. Then the wind carried you to the bells. I liked the poem, although as a pictoral poem you could have stuck to the image more, describing the waterfalls, the cedar siding, the covered bridge, the leaf strewn grass, the wooded surroundings, and certainly the waterwheel. So, as a pictoral, I had to assign only a 4. Sorry.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are describing a magical place here, I love chiming bells and have some on my balcony, but I expect it is the leaves that you can hear in the breeze, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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You are describing a magical place here, I love chiming bells and have some on my balcony, but I expect it is the leaves that you can hear in the breeze, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your poem, the imagery is powerful and vivid, especially at the end with the twigs and branches and the church bell. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your poem, the imagery is powerful and vivid, especially at the end with the twigs and branches and the church bell. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you. Have a nice week too :)
Comment from Beri Bee
This is quite lovely! Mirror images aren't all evil! You've written a beautiful piece. It flows well and nothing is jarring. I like the spookiness very much!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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This is quite lovely! Mirror images aren't all evil! You've written a beautiful piece. It flows well and nothing is jarring. I like the spookiness very much!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi! You're very nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a good taletelling of the story of a house where lived the evils even the ancient bells cry; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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This is a good taletelling of the story of a house where lived the evils even the ancient bells cry; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you. Have a nice week :)