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A Word To The Wise Is Sufficient.

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Wisdom calls Aloud.

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Often it's not those around you that you want forgiveness from but it's oneself's forgiveness.

We are often our toughest judges ..we can't let go of the guilt but you have a point ..Wasting time over spilt milk won't change matters ..

One must find the strength to put aside past errors and start living again... trying to make treasure of our errors so we don't repeat them.

A great thought provoking poem


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    CIAO FRANCA: It took me this long to answer to this review because I was trying to figure out how to answer it appropriately. You understand me so well...that you make me have to think about what I say in my replies to you.
    You see this poem exactly the way that it was meant to be seen. God bless you. Ciao, Franca. Your friend: rhonnie69.
Comment from Beri Bee
Excellent
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This is a powerful retelling of a wonderful story! I love the line, Is there anyone alive who didn't? Thank you for explaining it further in your description. Well done!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
    HELLO AGAIN BERI: Thank you for viewing and complementing my poem. You know exactly what I'm saying when you view my work. "Clever girl." God bless you, Beri. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by Beri Bee on 27-Apr-2019
    You are most welcome!
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Excellent
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I like the artwork. I have a photo of me standing in the same spot but taken from the other side. I enjoyed the poem and thought the message was delivered in a clear and smooth fashion. No edits or adjustments suggested by me. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
    HELLO LANCE: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. You are appreciated. I guess there, "IS,"...two sides to every story...huh? (smile) God bless you, my brother. Cordually: rhonnie69.