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NaPoWriMo 2019

Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Cowboy Talk"
National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from Treischel
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A clever little Nonet that highlights some stellar cowboy attributes like strong bodies that work hard and eat good meals. Nicely formed and performed. BTW, congrats on your degrees.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Hi Tom! Thank you for the review and the congrats too. No degrees in Literature or Poetry. God bless you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Oh, everybody loves cowboys. The rugged, straightforward, straight-talking male that we equate with building things, being polite, and honest. I'm glad you're home safe and sound, Alicia. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 09-May-2019
    Hi Marilyn! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Glad you got home safely, Alicia!
I do like your cowboy poem as you cover some hard realities about takeovers and reforms but it ends with a gratefulness for health and food.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Welcome back! I did not know you referred to yourself as a cowboy--maybe, there are more of you-all in Florida!! I enjoyed your use of the Triolet form and the vivid artwork. Here's to "abstract dreams" and best wishes catching up- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Hi Joan! FanArtReview has a cowboy contest. My dad loves westerns. I watched plenty of them in Miami with him. Everybody's into cowboys and indians. This was a nonet poem. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
reply by Joan E. on 26-Apr-2019
    Sorry--I meant Nonet. I used to watch cowboys and Indians with my dad when I was a kid. Hi, ho Silver! -Joan
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Sunnilicious,
The cowboy life isn't what it used to be, that's for sure.
I like your Nonet poem about cowboy talk.
Those strong bodies are still key.
Interesting art work to match
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    There's a Cowboy Contest on fanartreview. So cowboy choices are many.Thank you :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This nonet poem, Cowboy Talk, has the proper descending nine-to-one syllable formatting and seeks to explain in a few words the idea being a cowboy today.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good write, sunnilicious. You captured a lot of truth about cowboys in this piece. I think the form was a good one to use for it as well. Good job.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)