The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "A Brother's Call "Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from poetwatch
Good story and rhyming poem. We're still 6 brothers and one sister though gray as settled in our bones. It is good to hold on to memories that all we have. It is better to share those memories with those we love before we are not here. This is a good entry for the Rhyme contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Good story and rhyming poem. We're still 6 brothers and one sister though gray as settled in our bones. It is good to hold on to memories that all we have. It is better to share those memories with those we love before we are not here. This is a good entry for the Rhyme contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments,
Each Moment is Precious.
Comment from Earl Corp
If I had a six star rating left this poem would have earned it. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and it entertained me. One question: Shouldn't dual be duel? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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If I had a six star rating left this poem would have earned it. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and it entertained me. One question: Shouldn't dual be duel? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Yes, Thank you, typo on font change possibly. I really appreciate the heads up,
Blessings!